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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-01-09 08:31 PM



Petulant Petticoats Pout
~*Marge Tindal*~


Stub of toe from stubborn pose
Petulant petticoats pout
Cornered concern of tempers burn
Time Out - Time Out - Time Out

Keeping loyal mistress company
With woeful - doleful eyes
Ever the faithful companion
Pooped-out puppy does sympathize

Crocodile tear from peek-a-boo eye
Never hits the floor
Silly sniggle - Little giggle
Silly little girl






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
BloomingRose
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1 posted 2001-01-09 08:41 PM


Really cute! Reminds me of a little one I know, except he would be hardheaded about staying in the corner!
Love it Marge
Hugs,
Deb

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2 posted 2001-01-09 09:00 PM


OK... I love it... Cute little puppy pout sitting in time out...LOL..
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3 posted 2001-01-10 05:44 AM


Oh Margie this is soo cute, just love it and the graphic just gorgeous  
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe



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4 posted 2001-01-10 07:18 AM


BloomingRose~
I hope it stirs the memory of many a mom.

Nan~
Now you can see why it was so important to me to find the perfect picture !
I KNEW you'd like it !
Thanks for uploading the graphic for me.

Tracie~
Doesn't it just kinda makes ya' want to go awwwwwwwww ?
Yeah ... me too !
So tickled you enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~





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5 posted 2001-01-10 08:06 AM


Margie girl, this is beautiful, so really cute and delicious. And I love the graphic too. I really really do. You are so good at these love. You're soo good period.!
Take care love
                    Mushy
                        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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6 posted 2001-01-10 08:50 AM


this does indeed spark many a memory, only my little angel use to put her hands on her hips and give one of those "looks" .....Thank you for this, it brought many a smile to my face....




Greeneyes~




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Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
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7 posted 2001-01-10 09:24 AM


Marge,
Crocodile tear from peek-a-boo eye
Never hits the floor
Silly sniggle - Little giggle
Silly little girl

Very cute, enjoyed the read. *L*

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8 posted 2001-01-10 02:12 PM


OOOOHHHHHHHH thats ME standing there...LOL...spent may an afternoon in a corner too stubborn to say Im sorry...wonderful
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9 posted 2001-01-10 02:33 PM


Once again, Marge, wonderful. I absolutely adore this piece. I add this to my library, on the shelf next to your other "wonderfuls".

I'd rather be known as a fool with a heart, than be known as a heartless fool. <slh>

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10 posted 2001-01-10 02:44 PM


What a sweet poem! I HAD to read it when I saw the title.  
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11 posted 2001-01-10 03:16 PM


Marsha~
I LOVE spreading a smile.
Thank you for wearing one from this little piece.

GreenEyes~
Oh, Oh ... I know that little independant pose too !
I'm just so tickled that others can identify with it.
Thank you for letting me know.

Seymour~
I would think that the dad in you would recognize this in a heartbeat ..
Pops are such softies !
Thank you for reading, my friend.

Paula~
LOL @ stubborn !
Who'da thunk it ???  

Seraphin~
Thanks for making me feel good about this.
I appreciate you.

PoetdeVine~
This was inspired by a picture I've seen hanging in hospital corridors for years.
(Not this exact photo - but close)
It just demanded to be written.
Really glad to know the title pulled you in.
Thanks.
~*Marge*~


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12 posted 2001-01-10 03:34 PM


That's absolutely adorable. Made me smile here at work and that's no mean task!
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13 posted 2001-01-10 03:45 PM


I love your poem, hon! *S*

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 01-11-2001).]

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14 posted 2001-01-10 03:58 PM


Nothing petti about you, Marge!  
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15 posted 2001-01-10 03:58 PM


Nothing petti about you, Marge!  
Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2001-01-10 08:07 PM


Loki~
And knowing that you smiled -
gave me one to wear.  Thank you.

Suthern~
Hugs, hon !
BIG ONES !

Balladeer~
Thank you, love.
~*Marge*~


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17 posted 2001-01-10 11:58 PM


Marge, yet another great one . . .

Reminded me of a faithful pup from my youth.

Lovely


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18 posted 2001-01-11 04:33 PM


HM3~
It's so good to see you in here.
I revisited your homepage and was most impressed.

Glad you enjoyed this little memory-shaker.
Thank you for reading and responding.
~*Marge*~


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19 posted 2001-01-11 05:00 PM


Ah yes, the ever faithful corner companion...what a treasure we have in our Marge!
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He's standing guard, protecting her while she is in the corner......... I just love this poem and the picture is too sweet!   -SEA
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21 posted 2001-01-11 05:35 PM


Marge--the child in the graphic must have taken adorable lessons from you.
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22 posted 2001-01-11 07:15 PM


Karilea~
Thank you for such a gracious reply.

SEA~
Isn't she just the sweetest little thing ?
Thank you so much.

Martie~
You send me such a smile, my dear.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


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23 posted 2001-01-11 09:38 PM


Marge this is great!! One of my kids, if put in the corner, Made pictures with tears. The cat usually kept her company.  I love it!!!Hugs,   Mother E
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24 posted 2001-01-11 10:13 PM



This is absolutely adorable! It flows so well and has such a delightful childlike fervor to it, I just adore this piece.  I can't believe that I almost missed it! What a perfect poem to go with that famous picture - you brings pictures to life with your words

Take care,
Marge


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Marge Tindal
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25 posted 2001-01-12 09:40 PM


MotherEarth~
I'm so glad you found a memory tucked in this little corner.
Thank you for letting me know.

Melissa~
Your response delights me.
Thanks for the smile.
~*Marge*~


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26 posted 2001-01-12 09:51 PM


This is adorable, Marge!! So cute!!

Denise


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27 posted 2001-02-01 12:40 PM


Denise~
I thank you for your thoughts.
I'm cleaning up some replies I missed
and was pleased to see you didn't miss this one.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


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