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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2001-01-09 06:37 PM



Communing
Virginia Salter

weeping
to a puddle
in Your presence

.....from remorse
as this weakened vessel

.....from joy
in the strength
of Your indwelling
now an empowered being


© September  6,  2000

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
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1 posted 2001-01-10 05:30 AM


Oh WOW!!!
This is just so incredibly beautiful...well penned indeed  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2001-01-10 08:57 AM


Thank you so much, Tracie!
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2001-01-10 01:36 PM


Yes, very lovely. And don't feel bad, I get buried all the time too
Sandra

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
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Georgia, Fulton
4 posted 2001-01-10 02:07 PM


Fabulous write, Virginia!

Nathan

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
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Arkansas
5 posted 2001-01-10 02:43 PM


I do like what you say, and how softly it sounds when read out loud.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-02-02 02:16 PM


Enjoyed!

"I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



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