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KokoStewartKoomoa
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Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-01-09 02:43 PM



Tell me how you feel
Take a walk on the wild side
Yes! Express yourself!

Whisper in my ear
Bring smiles that beguile
Baby.. tell me more
Whisper how much you want me
Ohhh… Now, show me what you mean

Music to my ears
Whisper me to paradise
You won’t regret it….

© 2001 Koko (All rights reserved)




Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



© Copyright 2001 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Breathe~
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Washington...
1 posted 2001-01-09 02:47 PM


Whoo Hoo!  *taking a walk on the wild side*

And I actually said "whoo hoo" after I read this!  *G*


I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2001-01-09 04:45 PM


Yes, how I love this one!!!!!!!!!!!
I've often thought how wonderful it is that human beings can communicate, and how tragic that we don't more often!!  Koko.....this is a grand write, and I thank you for the read!!


Write on!
-<--<--{(@


Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2001-01-09 05:34 PM


Koko,
Cute, enjoyed the read.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2001-01-09 06:11 PM


"Whisper me to paradise.
You won't regret it."
I like your pillow talk..James

KokoStewartKoomoa
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5 posted 2001-01-10 03:22 AM


a big thanks to you all for commenting on this


Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-01-10 09:25 AM


KoKo~
Oh, I like this immensely !

'Whisper me to paradise'

Indeed.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
7 posted 2001-01-10 10:18 AM


This is a little walk on the wild and I love it cause, I'm kind of like that too...anyways, this is a cute poem.....wonderful write!

Nathan

CocoBaci
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8 posted 2001-01-10 01:45 PM


KOKO, this is sweet I digged the beat I liked the expression and needless to mention I enjoyed the read...
coco

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