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Temptress
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0 posted 2001-01-09 11:30 AM


Shhh!!
I was never here,
Stealing in and reading words
Without leaving a trace behind but this.
Shhh!!
I was never hear
Wondering if this place
Would set a mood for the day
Shhh!!
I didn't say a word in here,
Left my voice outside,
And came quietly between these walls.
Shh!
I didn't leave a trace behind but this,
Its far to early to speak.

10:32am

Can I be your willful breeze,
Come to touch,
Your heart to ease?


© Copyright 2001 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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1 posted 2001-01-09 12:01 PM


I am SOOOOOOO guilty of this! *G* Great work!
Stan
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Posts 120
Inland Empire Southern California
2 posted 2001-01-09 12:34 PM


Yes, Jenn and sometimes you surprise people other ways too, even when they are in their nighties.  But Shhhhhhhh


Sven
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3 posted 2001-01-09 01:02 PM


it'll be our little secret. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Temptress
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4 posted 2001-01-09 03:03 PM


suthern,
AH HA!!! Sooo...One confession brings them all. tsk tsk!! LOL!

Stan,
I know, sometimes I can actually appear mature, eh? Nice to see ya!  

Sven,
Another secret? Well..okay..sure..I can do that, but what about that stuff you keep under your...   errr...Ooops! Almost let the kitten out of the chokehold! LOL!
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Can I be your willful breeze,
Come to touch,
Your heart to ease?



[This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 01-09-2001).]

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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5 posted 2001-01-10 04:57 AM


Oooops this is me as well sometimes, I must confess  

Tarcie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
6 posted 2001-01-10 12:09 PM


Temptress,
...and me! Great poem!  
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.


catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
7 posted 2001-01-10 01:08 PM


Great poem, I know the feeling. Sometimes we are in such a hurry that the intent and the conclusion do not click.
Loved this.
Sandra

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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8 posted 2001-02-02 01:09 PM


ROFL  !!!

"I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



Effigy
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 486
disbelief
9 posted 2001-02-02 01:23 PM


Well said.  

I write poetry for the sake of peotry, for the sake of art. Not for you, not for them, and not for me. I don't write. It writes itself.




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