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Clamoring Elation
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Clamoring Elation |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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Clamoring Elation Given over to trail of mask ... wanderings ... showcased within hidden words ... releasing ... as your tears flow ... aimlessly ... lost in nothingness Reaching pinnacles of torment ... adornment ... trophied in ink and glass ... pennings ... engraved on clouds of waste ... expanding ... into the mist of rainbows Dwelling in future histories ... budgeted ... fragments of the heart ... shared ... in oblivion's rehearsal ... cascading ... in the tears of pain's freedom Lyrics of soothing grace ... harmonizing ... bringing symphonies clash ... resounding ... bellows vibrate inwardly ... assuring... peaceful resolution of sleep We smile ... We rejoice ... We return ... to the tides of clamoring elation as I rest my pen evermore Mark Christopher [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 01-09-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Mark--I love the title, and this is a wonderful peice. Excellent writing... Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mark--where is this place of clammering elation? I want to go there! Great poem...I liked the format and interesting content. I must read it again. Hugs! |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Interesting, Mark..Haven't quite figured out what it all means yet, but I like it just the same..Shouting of spirits, outcrys of happiness,Guess it could say alot of things, Whatever it is you are saying here, you say it well as you always do...Liked it, I did... ~LL~< !signature--> The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown [This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 01-09-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very nice, like the style and how it pulls the reader on. I certainly hope your pen will not rest forevermore, though. |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
I like your style very much and it's a beautiful poem, thanks Mark, AP |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mark, this is great, but don't you dare put your pen down forever!! What will we all do? Be happy Sandra |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Mark~ Marvelous piece my friend, wonderful write as always Loved the ending We smile ... We rejoice ... We return ... to the tides of clamoring elation as I rest my pen evermore ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Well, just look at you s t r e t c h i n g in this beauty. Wonderfully presented as another facet of your talent. *Hugs* n' *Stuff* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Lyrics of soothing grace ... harmonizing ... bringing symphonies clash ... resounding ... bellows vibrate inwardly ... assuring... peaceful resolution of sleep" Mark, Mark, Mark ... absolutely loved this! What a wonderful format and presentation for the beautiful and descriptive sentiments within. Don't you ever put that pen down though, or I'd be beside myself! Well OK ... only as you sleep, but then you pick it right back up again dear poet ... wonderful words from you to start my morning!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my freind, this is utterly wonderful, really beautiful writing as always from you. I do hope you weren't saying that your never going to write again, because you're far too good to let that happen. This really is a wonderful piece. Excellant work it truly is. Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Exquisite writing, as you create a world of beginnings and endings, in a most enjoyable read! Deb |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nay Sir, do not rest thy pen but dip in ink well again...and again... for amidst the clamoring of the bell imagine for a moment, love's true swell... and thus, to write to capture the night to encase the dreams of sun, and moon beams... write on... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I know this place... you take us there with every poem! *S* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Given over to trail of mask ... wanderings ... showcased within hidden words ... releasing ... ========================= Reaching pinnacles of torment ... adornment ... trophied in ink and glass ... pennings ... engraved on clouds of waste ... expanding ... into the mist of rainbows ======================= fragments of the heart ... shared ... in oblivion's rehearsal ... cascading ... in the tears of pain's freedom Lyrics of soothing grace ... harmonizing ... peaceful resolution of sleep We smile ... We rejoice ... We return ... to the tides of clamoring elation as I rest my pen evermore ============================= very cool poem MC... you KNOW Im digging the (...) infectious arent they LOL ... I really like the cryptic feel of this and the format as well ... We all need to find release and closure ... I like seeing you try new styles poetically as well ... and I always like seeing you write in free verse like I said.. way cool...even groovy me No one ever told me ... I could get lost while standing still ... and sorrow doesnt make a sound ... as it takes away all your will. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
silly me..forgot to put in me library ... blame it on the flu bug  later me |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Love your form Mark. It is always nice and refreshing to try different ones. Nicely done...enjoyed your words as always.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Mark, A lovely read. May your pen continue on and on... Elise |
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cathybohannan Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 140Paintsville,KY |
Continue on with the good work, Mark Cathy Marie Bohannan |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mark* You wove so many emotions and moments into the free weave of this poem...Your work always finds a spot in my heart to touch and I come away from your poetry wondering....**just how did he do that**...but bottom line my friend I'm glad you do and I'll continue to read as you continue to weave....The rest.....I think you KNOW Take care of you MC~ |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
beautiful words, the pen is quite an amazing instrument when used with the heart as you have did here. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Dwelling in future histories ... budgeted ... fragments of the heart ... shared ... in oblivion's rehearsal ... cascading ... in the tears of pain's freedom Mark love this jewel...and can't do anything else than echo the others...love it....love it...love it....my friend. (((hugs))) Charisma |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Very nice Mark. Keep up the great work. Hugs, ME |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Very interesting style. Goes down smooth like a nice Coors Light  LOVE IS GOD, LOVE IS WAR, LOVE IS WHAT YOUR LIFE IS FOR. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Thank you everyone. This was an experiment in style for me. I appreciate the responses to this piece as I did not know if it would go over well. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Go over well? Well? Mark...your talents precede you...all who see the name Mark know talent has come to grace us with a gift... never forget, Sir...that you have that...and more... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Karilea-Thank you my friend for that encouragement but you know how it feels to try something new and wonder how it will be received. Your words are too kind but they mean alot to me. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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