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KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-01-08 10:28 PM

Sunlight streams over rumpled satin
and kisses my mind
with a fresh vision of you.
Cloudscapes meander
in the blue January wind...
I listen to you breathe,
as morning reveals
her mysterious splendour
in the pink eastern sky.

Restless surf sings softly
against black velvet sand….
Morning doves coo to the serenade
of a new dawning day,
while I lie tucked secure
and warm in your embrace
of radiant love,
born of tranquil beauty,
and ultimate revelation…..

And as you lie in the mists of slumber,
I am the woman who dreams of you.

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2001-01-08 10:35 PM

~~~ Koko ~~~
Oh.......what a beautiful, beautiful poem, with a graphic to match!! After looking at ice all day, just to set my eyes on that scene and read that poem made it a perfect end to my day!! Thank you!!

Write on!
-<--<--{(@

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

2 posted 2001-01-08 10:36 PM

Daydreams can be so beautiful, can't they? Your words are just as beautiful, my friend. Keep up the good work!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

3 posted 2001-01-10 03:25 AM

thanks for the kind comments on this poem!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

4 posted 2001-01-10 09:24 AM

Koko,
These are wonderful images to get lost in when surrounded by winters harsh reality! Thanks!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-01-10 03:15 PM

And that is my dream...to have a woman that dreams about me and thinks about me constantly...James

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

6 posted 2001-01-10 06:16 PM

Gee this poem gave me the warm fuzzies. i loved it dear friend.
Love and light,
Richard

Beckalini
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

7 posted 2001-01-10 08:05 PM

Only one word springs to mind..."Wow!". You have certainly captured some beautiful images and feelings in this eloquently penned poem. *smiles*,
Becky.

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

8 posted 2001-01-11 12:04 PM

my thanks to everyone for for the kind comments. This was a bit different for me and I wasn't quite sure of it at first. I had a friend tell me it didn't make sense with the last 2 lines....LOL Ya never know if what you meant comes through to the reader the same as your heart meant it.

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2001-01-12 04:31 PM

Beautiful words enhanced by a wonderful picture... well done!

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