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insect
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0 posted 2001-01-08 08:18 PM


She asked me if I'd like a drink?
I said yes ma'am
She spun around in her dress and said what do you think?
I said YES ma'am

We danced under the chandelier like a sailor and dame from 1945
The slow erotic trumpet sound held us close, I never felt so alive
The phonograph player skipped but we kept on dancing
In the window the pale moon climbed with our moments of romancing

She whispered a kiss into my ear
As her hands caressed, it was all so clear
I knew this was that moment that the guys made me fear
She evoked a new sensation that shed a timeless tear

She sensed my fear and asked if I was OK?
I said yes ma'am I am
She began to smile saying you’re a virgin for the very last day
I said YES ma'am I am



© Copyright 2001 insect - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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1 posted 2001-01-08 10:43 PM


Hi insect...
You know....I can't believe this poem is on the second page......it is fantastic, and deserves it's spot in the sun, at the top!!
Enjoyed this one totally!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@


Victoria
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2 posted 2001-01-08 10:46 PM


ha ..good one insect..i must of missed this one the first time around.. nicely done

                    ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Paula Finn
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missouri
3 posted 2001-01-08 10:55 PM


Hey babe its great having you back I have missed you...this is great!!!!!!

Life's a game...but who says you have to follow the rules?



insect
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4 posted 2001-01-08 11:34 PM


Sunny1…Yes ma'am!
                 Ha!
                 Thanks for the lift sweet poet friend  

Victoria…WOW! Another sweet poet
                  I mean….. Yes ma'am! Ha!
                  Thank you Victoria  

Paula Finn…YES ma'am I am…. happy to receive a reply
                      from you always……Thank you Paula  
_______________________________________________
For Sunny, Victoria, Paula and SpitFire

Sweet friends with passion and fire
Your words sing to me and I much desire
Your breath whispering love in my ear to my soul
Without your touch I wouldn't feel whole

I send kisses back and smiles for all
I never feel alone when ever you call
I peek in at you as shy as I am
If you ask me I must say YES ma'am I am


[This message has been edited by insect (edited 01-09-2001).]

SpitFire
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5 posted 2001-01-08 11:52 PM


~I,...very nice reading you. Left me smiling. Always. *Peace you.
insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

6 posted 2001-01-09 12:07 PM


Fire… YES ma'am!
            Thank you my flaming poet
            You will always give me a warm
            feeling whenever you throw a
            flame my way

Parker
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since 2000-01-06
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ON
7 posted 2001-01-09 11:19 AM


So you were in a different kind of challenge I guess insect....lol
Very funny write.  

James

SEA
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with you
8 posted 2001-01-09 11:32 AM


Insect~   you know, I love this......... very nice.   -SEA
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
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Arkansas
9 posted 2001-01-09 11:51 AM


I'm so glad your mother taught you to be so polite. YES SIR, you're quite a guy.  
VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
10 posted 2001-01-09 11:52 AM


Very cute and a bit naughty.  Well, I'm 55 and from the old school, what can I say?

But I can't help but smile inside and I loved the dance, too!

insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

11 posted 2001-01-09 10:33 PM


Haleyja…Thanks
                 Glad to make you laugh!

SEA…Thank you ma'am
            Nice to see your smiling face SEA!

Inot2B…Thanks…..Umm! I hope she doesn't
                have access to Adult!

VAS…Thank you
            Always happy to bring smiles!

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