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0 posted 2001-01-08 05:09 PM



‘Ized

Saw a snippet of movie today,
Joanne was being Paul Newmanized
by his great, sparkling blue eyes
[wonder what he had to say…]

Saw in a tabloid not long ago
Melanie had been Banderisized
And me, I get me Diamondized…
[but only ‘cause I love his music so]

I know someone who can Simonize
by all her writings from the heart
and she can really, really mesmerize
[she has for me, from the start…]

makes me wonder, wonder wise
how many fellows really realize
how their words materialize the truth to see
how they use them to mesmerize you and me…

and me? I’ve had my share of cries
‘cause I’ve been Paul Newmanized
and yes, I still want to be Diamondized
but it hurts me when my Simon cries…



01.08.01

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-01-08 05:17 PM


I've been Passions-ized, Sunshine-ized, and tons of other types of -izes....
doreen peri
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2 posted 2001-01-08 05:24 PM


one day i'll tell you my maiden name....
i LOVE this!!! thank you so much
(((((hugs)))))))



wheniseeyousmilingwhen ihearyousinginglavender androses every endingabeginning theway you turnandcatchmewithyoureye that's whereibelong-paulsimon

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3 posted 2001-01-08 05:41 PM


this is for sure a GROOVY... and its way cool too...
love the premise of this....
and yes.....
I was Van-ized and Browne-ized a long time ago ... and I have always realized the power of their words to mesmerize ...

Shilo
by Diamond-ize
for Sun-ize  

          Young child with dreams
          Dream ev'ry dream on your own
          When children play
          seems like you end up alone

          Papa says he'd love to be with you
          If he had the time
          So you turn on the only friend you can find
          There in your mind

          Shilo, when I was young
          I used to call you name
          When no one else would come
          Shilo, you always came
          And we'd play

          Young girl with fire
          Something said she understood
          I wanted to fly
          She made me feel like I could

          Held my hand out, and I let her take me
          Blind as a child
          All I saw was the way that she made me smile
          She made me smile

          Shilo, when I was young
          I used to call you name
          When no one else would come
          Shilo, you always came
          And you'd stay

          Had a dream, and it filled me with wonder
          She had other plans
          "Got to go, and I know that you'll understand"
          I understand

          Shilo, when I was young
          I used to call you name
          When no one else would come
          Shilo, you always came
          Come today

(was hard to pick which one to post)



No one ever told me ... I could get lost while standing still ...
and sorrow doesnt make a sound ... as it takes away all your will.


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4 posted 2001-01-08 06:39 PM


Elizabeth...lol...perhaps this one will "immortalize" me...hahahahahahaha....

Rock on Doreen....marbleize your way to dreams....

JM...you can Diamondize me with ANY of his music ANYTIME!  Thanks you three!

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5 posted 2001-01-08 06:42 PM


as long as she's not demonized she's ok!!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen


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6 posted 2001-01-08 06:51 PM


Sunshine,
your wisdom left me mesmerized, tantalized, de-schedulized, and now I must de-materialise
and go on my way.

Right on!
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.


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7 posted 2001-01-08 07:47 PM


Irish...LOL...[that's one "ize" I didn't think about...but you're right!...

Kethry...you dematerialized...where are you!...hugs, and thanks!...

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8 posted 2001-01-08 07:50 PM


and then there's always "actualized"--smiles to you and your generous heart....
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9 posted 2001-01-08 07:52 PM


well, I may need to be something-ized if this keeps up!!  LOL  

wonderful my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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10 posted 2001-01-08 08:17 PM


serenity, make that discombobulized...and it'll work...

Sven...yeah...we'll think of something...LOL...

Kethry
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11 posted 2001-01-09 08:41 AM


Maybe Sven could be scandaleyesd

Oh! materialized for another look, surprised! 'cause I have been Cheshireised, pressurized and womanized now it's time I'm fantasized as I go to bed.
Keth


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.


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12 posted 2001-01-09 08:56 AM


I NEVER cease to be amazed by your imagination - (I think the last snippet that "ized" me was a scene where Michelle's Liquid eyes were gazing at her male counterpart ...) - I'm not immune to Pfeiffer - given time I could think of others - This is great!
Nan
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13 posted 2001-01-09 07:43 PM


Hello Again...America... I'm a Believer... Beautiful Noise... Song Sung Blue... Captain Sunshine...

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14 posted 2001-01-10 11:26 AM


Kethry, Mr. Yeats, Nan...you ALL have me smiling!  Thank you!
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