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A day |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
A day it was a very grey day - my mind was quiet and empty and there was this green bus that I can remember I must keep on looking if I only knew what I am looking for is it peace inside, deep inside? is it a dawn I have forgot? is it a dream I can’t remember? is it love? is it you? do you remember that very grey day? what a smell in the air! what a smile in your eyes! what a joy in my soul! what a day! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Agust....this is good! |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
No the bus was white the sun shown bright The smell in the air made me want to swear. Hey wait a minute are we talking about the same day. I think I like yours better!!! |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
thank you sunshine and thank you inot2B for your nice comments! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice poem  |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
thank you for reading vandana, AP |
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