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Sunnyone
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0 posted 01-07-2001 04:35 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone


Somewhere in your heart my love lies waiting...
Deep within a room that you can't see...
You're so afraid to know, just how deep that love
can go...
That you locked it up and threw away the key...

But you don't know the power of emotion...
You think that every lover is the same...
and you don't even see what waits on bended knee...
You can't judge honest love by childish games...

So, I'll just wait right here until you're ready...
Just go out there and have yourself a ball...
Yes, I'll be standing by...on my shoulder you can cry...
I'm strong enough to lift you when you fall...

I've waited for real love throughout my lifetime...
Sometimes I feel as ancient as the sea...
Many times I've wondered, shed my tears while this I pondered...
Is there someone out there who waits for me?


I had originally posted a graphic with this picture that was fine when posted, but when viewed by members at Passions, took too much time to load.
If anyone is curious as to what the picture looked like, email me, and I will send you your own copy.
Thank you!!




Write on!
-<--<--{(@



[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 01-07-2001).]
© Copyright 2001 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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1 posted 01-07-2001 05:41 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

My friend, this is spectacular. Sounds a little sad, and filled with longing. You know I understand.
Beautiful picture, also. Did you create it?
S
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 01-07-2001 05:43 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sunny1~
This is lovely~
The title is most fitting, as it took forever for it to load.
Soooooooo, while I was Waiting ...
it did give me an opportunity to read it slowly. (Tee-Hee)
I even refreshed three times.
Hmmmmmm !  

Wonderful sentiments expressed from that heart of yours.
Love n' hugs
~*Marge*~


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3 posted 01-07-2001 06:05 PM       View Profile for Poeminister   Email Poeminister   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poeminister's Home Page   View IP for Poeminister

I like this muchly and miranda background.  Beautifully written.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

Sunnyone
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4 posted 01-07-2001 06:19 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

~~~ hi 'S' ~~~
I thought that you might like this one as much as I did writing it.  I will be emailing shortly...in my 'free' time!!  

~~~ Marge ~~~
The graphic has been deleted. Thank you for reading.

~~~ Poeminister ~~~
I thank you for visiting today, and good to see that you got the picture in.  It just seemed to fit the words, and 'miranda', although beautiful, was too large to keep here.  thank you, my friend!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@

Kethry
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5 posted 01-07-2001 08:02 PM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Sunny,
this poem is so heartbreakingly poignant and yet it rings true. Absolutely splendiferous!
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Sunnyone
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6 posted 01-07-2001 08:10 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

~~~ hi Kethry ~~~
Oh.......I love that big word: "splendiforous"!!!!!  And thank you so much for giving this poem a read, my good friend.


Write on!
-<--<--{(@

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7 posted 01-07-2001 09:01 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Sunny, the someones who would wait for you could fill MAdison Square Garden!!  
Sunshine
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8 posted 01-07-2001 09:18 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I will agree with 'Deer...they would be there not only for you, and your poetry, but your music as well!...
Paula Finn
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9 posted 01-08-2001 01:06 AM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

He would be a fool to keep you waiting long dear twin...this is exquisite
Sunnyone
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10 posted 01-08-2001 02:28 AM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

~~~ Mr. 'Deer ~~~
You are so sweet......I thank you, and flattery will get you...........?  

~~~ Sunshine ~~~
Oh......this heart is so grateful to have friends like you......I would be so thrilled to play in Madison Square Garden...just like a non-reachable dream come true!!  

~~~ Paula ~~~
Thank you, my twin, and you know how much I look forward to your replies!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@

Jamie
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11 posted 01-08-2001 02:42 AM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

even if there numbers are few
those few men will always await you


Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

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even if their numbers are few
those few men will always await you


Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Jamie
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13 posted 01-08-2001 02:43 AM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

must be true-- it posted twice...lol


Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Sunnyone
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14 posted 01-08-2001 09:54 AM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

~~~ hi Jamie ~~~
You can post replies as many times as you like, my friend......from you, they are always a welcome sight!! Thank you!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@

dgvarner
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15 posted 01-08-2001 07:52 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

some say waiting makes for too much wasted time...i dont believe in wasted time..its all a learning experience..and i say if i feel it in my soul, its worth the waiting..  

very real, very wonderful poem..  

hugs, g


"there is no 'best' in a world of individuals"
-unknown

Sunnyone
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16 posted 01-08-2001 10:39 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

~~~ hi 'g' ~~~
I share a similar philosophy with you....anything that one chooses to put effort into in life, is never wasted effort. And sometimes the wait is definitely worth it!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@

nakdthoughts
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17 posted 01-09-2001 08:55 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Somewhere in your heart my love lies waiting...
sounds like a beautiful song, Sunny1

~Wynter...


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


Irish Rose
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18 posted 01-09-2001 08:57 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Sometimes I feel as ancient as the sea...


boy I know how this feels  

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen

Sunnyone
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19 posted 01-09-2001 11:00 AM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

~~~ Wynter ~~~
Yes.....it may turn into a song, and I thank you for the idea!!  

~~~ Irish Rose ~~~
We are of the Earth, and the Earth is ancient, so I suppose we are, in reality, ancient ourselves!!  Thank you, my friend!!


Write on!
-<--<--{(@

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a lovely write...wish I could have seen the graphic
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