Open Poetry #11 |
I am... |
dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i am...a drifter on a sea of dreams i am...afraid in a world of uncertainty i am...sincere honest and fair i am...an open book you may misinterpret i am...deep you may find me within i am...darkness where truth is present i am...light if you should stumble i am...inspiration if you seek to be inspired i am...art when i draw myself in i am...contradiction rebel and angel i am...shy but ever bold i am...passion i am...longing i am...real i am..poet because i breathe -dgvarner 1-7-01 "there is no 'best' in a world of individuals" -unknown [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 01-07-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ This is wonderfully well-done. 'i am...an open book you may misinterpret' As long as they read you ... each page is open to interpretation ~ I LOVE IT ! My favorite line - wish I'da thunk it ! And this is super - 'i am...darkness where truth is present i am...light if you should stumble' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, this is truly brilliant, DG......what a great write!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
And such a fine poet, she is! Awesome work of art, this poem, and its writer. Sandra |
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*Majestria* New Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 7 |
You keep on with the good work. I like this poem because it reminds me of me. Beautifully done |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
dgvarner, Very well done, loved every line. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
i am...contradiction rebel and angel hmmmm i'm not sure I know that part of you, but I like the rebel angel contradiction. There is alot to you that doesn't meet the eye. Parker |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
an excellent presentation of yourself, dg... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dg, bravo! well done! write on Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Contradiction and misinterpretation are FUN things though and I have enjoyed both since knowing you. Well done my friend. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dg~ I sure liked this.......the open book.....yes, I know that....... very well written......I enjoyed this very much -SEA |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
MARGE..thank you! so glad you enjoyed those lines always good to hear from you SUNNY1..brilliant? wow..thanks! CATALINA..thats so sweet..thank you! MAJESTRIA..lol..you my twin? thanks for reading! thanks DANIEL! glad you stopped in! PARKER..hmm..you dont huh? you havent been paying attention.. i am...a secret you must seek to find... BALLADEER..i thank you much KETH..thank you friend poet MARK..heres to FUN! SEA..so glad you enjoyed reading me (i'm THAT much of an 'open book' aye?? lol) i suppose all us poets have some chapters open for public reading dont we.. thanks all! hugs, g "there is no 'best' in a world of individuals" -unknown |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
enjoyed the read..simply written but the images it conjured in this reader's mind were marvellous |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thank you KAILE glad you enjoyed hugs, g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
DgV, What a wonderful presentation of the terrific person that you are, Nice poem! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
DgV, You sound like a very interesting, multi-faceted person- who has a strong sense of self-yet some underscovered mystery as well. You are one who has a lot going for you, even as your poetry shows. David No Better Place do I know Than where Hearts knit as one, For in that grand experience, The Better ALL become. God Bless us All!!! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
DEN..hey there my friend thank you for your very sweet reply DEN TWIN DAVID.. thank you so much for your reply as well! very thoughtful, very kind hugs, g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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