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She Tore My Heart Today

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DonFurr
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since 01-01-2001
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Monticello IN


0 posted 01-07-2001 03:45 PM       View Profile for DonFurr   Email DonFurr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for DonFurr


She had me take her to the airport
To see a man who is far away
She went to meet him and
She tore my heart today


© Copyright 2001 Don Furr - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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since 09-18-2000
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Alabama


1 posted 01-07-2001 03:48 PM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

Welcome to a place where you can write and heal your heart.
Irish Rose
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since 04-06-2000
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2 posted 01-07-2001 03:51 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

she had YOU take her to the airport?
Oh, welcome to Passions, that is terrible.
Writing heals......this one broke my heart.

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen

ranita311
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since 01-04-2001
Posts 10


3 posted 01-07-2001 04:20 PM       View Profile for ranita311   Email ranita311   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ranita311

i know just how you feel !!! welcome to passions..  
                     ranita311
1slick_lady
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since 12-22-2000
Posts 6147
standing on a shadow's lace


4 posted 01-07-2001 04:54 PM       View Profile for 1slick_lady   Email 1slick_lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit 1slick_lady's Home Page   View IP for 1slick_lady

the tears stream down my face
I know just how you feel
just place your hand inside of mine
and I will help you heal

        Don
she WILL fly back!!!

friends forever
      Helen


[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 01-07-2001).]
Sunshine
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since 06-25-99
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Listening to every heart


5 posted 01-07-2001 05:33 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

A wonderful first post as your entree into Passions!  Welcome, and please check your e-mail for a special greeting!
*Majestria*
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since 01-07-2001
Posts 7


6 posted 01-07-2001 05:54 PM       View Profile for *Majestria*   Email *Majestria*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Majestria*

I loved your poem.  It's very sad but writing about it and getting out in the open helps, trust me.  Good luck!!!
Mother_Earth
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since 11-20-2000
Posts 1387
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Mich


7 posted 01-07-2001 07:20 PM       View Profile for Mother_Earth   Email Mother_Earth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mother_Earth

Welcome to Passions. You are brave and must love her alot to let her go.  Hugs, ME
Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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since 02-12-2000
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Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A.


8 posted 01-07-2001 07:43 PM       View Profile for Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith   Email Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith

Welcome,
Mine flew back yesterday into the arms of another. But at least she didn't have me take her to the airport!
Pretty intense writing here. Brevity is nice. I look forward to reading more.
Ian


Sing while you may
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Qa'sepel
Kit McCallum
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since 04-30-2000
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9 posted 01-07-2001 09:09 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Welcome to Passions DonFurr! You've said so very much in so few words ... welcome to the place that helps you heal.  Looking forward to reading more!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
Kethry
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since 07-29-2000
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Victoria Australia


10 posted 01-07-2001 09:20 PM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Don,
welcome to passions.  *HuGS*
be well
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

DonFurr
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since 01-01-2001
Posts 176
Monticello IN


11 posted 01-09-2001 09:42 AM       View Profile for DonFurr   Email DonFurr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DonFurr

Thank You All!
For the warm words of welcome.
It makes me feel as if I have found a new home. It has been years since I published anything new. I am so glad to have an outlet in this time of need.
One special lady gets the credit for reminding me how good it feels to write.She will know its for her when she reads this.
Thank you dear lady once again.


passing shadows
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displaced


12 posted 04-19-2004 04:03 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

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