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DonFurr
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since 2001-01-01
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Monticello IN

0 posted 2001-01-07 03:45 PM



She had me take her to the airport
To see a man who is far away
She went to meet him and
She tore my heart today



© Copyright 2001 Don Furr - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
1 posted 2001-01-07 03:48 PM


Welcome to a place where you can write and heal your heart.
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-01-07 03:51 PM


she had YOU take her to the airport?
Oh, welcome to Passions, that is terrible.
Writing heals......this one broke my heart.

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen


ranita311
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since 2001-01-04
Posts 10

3 posted 2001-01-07 04:20 PM


i know just how you feel !!! welcome to passions..  
                     ranita311

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
4 posted 2001-01-07 04:54 PM


the tears stream down my face
I know just how you feel
just place your hand inside of mine
and I will help you heal

        Don
she WILL fly back!!!

friends forever
      Helen


[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 01-07-2001).]

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2001-01-07 05:33 PM


A wonderful first post as your entree into Passions!  Welcome, and please check your e-mail for a special greeting!
*Majestria*
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since 2001-01-07
Posts 7

6 posted 2001-01-07 05:54 PM


I loved your poem.  It's very sad but writing about it and getting out in the open helps, trust me.  Good luck!!!
Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20
Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan
7 posted 2001-01-07 07:20 PM


Welcome to Passions. You are brave and must love her alot to let her go.  Hugs, ME
Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 197
Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A.
8 posted 2001-01-07 07:43 PM


Welcome,
Mine flew back yesterday into the arms of another. But at least she didn't have me take her to the airport!
Pretty intense writing here. Brevity is nice. I look forward to reading more.
Ian


Sing while you may
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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Ontario, Canada
9 posted 2001-01-07 09:09 PM


Welcome to Passions DonFurr! You've said so very much in so few words ... welcome to the place that helps you heal.  Looking forward to reading more!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
10 posted 2001-01-07 09:20 PM


Don,
welcome to passions.  *HuGS*
be well
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.


DonFurr
Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172
Monticello IN
11 posted 2001-01-09 09:42 AM


Thank You All!
For the warm words of welcome.
It makes me feel as if I have found a new home. It has been years since I published anything new. I am so glad to have an outlet in this time of need.
One special lady gets the credit for reminding me how good it feels to write.She will know its for her when she reads this.
Thank you dear lady once again.



passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
12 posted 2004-04-19 04:03 AM


ouch
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