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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-01-07 03:43 PM


Vagabond Silhouettes

I look in shadows just beyond
Predicaments that lie ahead.
Situations gone vagabond
Silhouettes beyond the seed bed.

My mind is turning future soil
Possibilities yet to come
Reaching into a multi-foil
That beats upon my ego's drum.

Some untried paths to try and tread.
Some intrigue of a subtle kind
Some fantasies I thought were dead
Within the phantoms of my mind.

It's here I die and resurrect
Through spooks and ghosts I call alive
And It's here I seek to perfect
In order, that I may survive.

I look for breaches in the shoal
I look for shadows in my soul.


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-01-07 04:22 PM


Seymour~

'My mind is turning future soil'

I know a spade when I see one -
and I love the 'gardener' in you !
Such fertile territory to till ...
write on, dear vagabond poet.
~*Marge*~




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2 posted 2001-01-07 05:38 PM


When you plant seeds of thought such as this, my mind runs rampant in fragrant floral landscapes...

I love it!

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3 posted 2001-01-07 05:39 PM


Some untried paths to try and tread.
Some intrigue of a subtle kind
Some fantasies I thought were dead
Within the phantoms of my mind.

It's here I die and resurrect
Through spooks and ghosts I call alive
And It's here I seek to perfect
In order, that I may survive.

I look for breaches in the shoal
I look for shadows in my soul.
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"And It's here I seek to perfect"

well me thinks ya have found what ya were seeking me sweet soul gardener...
and me likes how your garden grows ...all the way cool seeds ya sow  
*winkiewinkie* me Spooky Stinky *L*
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Am I loved by my words
Will my vows weather the tide
Bended knees can forsee
all the rhythms of life
And a heart can be held without pride
~Vante

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2001-01-07 07:38 PM


Marge,
Thank you for the sweet comment. *L*

Karilea,
Thank you my sunshine. *L*

JM,
Dear vagabond shadow, winkiewinkie, stinky.

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5 posted 2001-01-12 04:08 PM


And here I thought you were gonna be tattling on LJA's and Balladeer's latest exploits. *G* You weren't, dern it... but I'll forgive your loyalty because you wrote such a great poem! *S*
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