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wish you were here. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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"wish you were here" is what her note said and in those four words I knew her heart a heart that was alone and lost seeking a love that she could hold I didn't know what to say I wanted to tell her so much to tell her how I felt tell her how she's made me feel give to her what she's given me but, all I could say was "wish you were here too. . ." ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Sometimes that's all that needs to be said ... you're right Especially if the magic is there Nicely done Sven  |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You seem to be alone and sad. Wish you could tell her that she is the one and for her to come nearer to you. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
love those little "love" notes....perfect write here.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, If I say wish you were here would you then fly so near help to stop my disappear My, I wish...you were here. Write on Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
I liked this ......somethings are better left unsaid |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sven I think that says it all..James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is sad I liked the simplicity in this very much. "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
A wonderful response to a softly smiling statement. Simply beautiful, Sven. I am sure you have given much of your own.Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What more could you say, my friend. That is plenty.. Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And what if it had said "wish I were there..."...? |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sometimes the simpliest responses speak volumes, she's lucky that you'd want to be with her hon. Beautiful as always... I don't think you have it in you to write a truly venomous poem Isis *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sven, any words from you would make a woman's heart melt. you are one of the sweetest and most compassionate people/poets i've met in a long time. this is just beautiful. im sure it made her happy. take care. amy ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, If anyone's heart can bring her there, yours can. Simply beautiful.... Much Love, Elise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you all my friends. . . it is amazing how the simplest words can convey so much. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And your reply said so much. *S* I like this one very much, Sven! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
This is very touching SVEN, a sweet poem and I thank you for the delightful read... ~*coco*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very touching, Sven, I agree! Beautifully done! Denise |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
there is a a certain beauty to this one. Thanks for sharing |
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