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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Stories of an unplanned pen mirror'd ball above suspend and every shadow is a yen that brings me dancing back for more... Lights in litter on the floor a fellowship of glance of yore to feel my soul a leap in soar completion is my end... everything...I am? ascend... mascara traces on the lens tell me, I'll believe my friend... and be your lovely, loving whore. Each word I write, I have foresworn. And by the sacred of my mourn, my soul is naked--unadorned I pray that I may write---THE END. *and? just to be on the safe side...this is a poem about COMPLETION...* |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I love your ending and I most certainly hope your begining brings you all the best |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Cool format Serenity!  I'm so glad this isn't about "COMPLETION" Awesome piece.....Enjoyed!  ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
S'en...as hard as THE END is...it's the only way to begin and live for "you" again...but that never makes it easy does it. Hugs and Love my friend~ |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I really enjoyed the read. great writing my friend. Love and light, Richard |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I also enjoyed the read too serenity....awesome poem! Thanks for sharing! Nathan |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Seren' Just to be perfectly selfish, I hope "The End" isn't approaching if that means your writing. You've got to keep doing this long enough for my pea brain to trace a synaptic thread that comes to understand it and learns how to do it. You're good, kid. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
There are some things that just NEED ending...and you did it so very well...hugs my friend... Life's a game...but who says you have to follow the rules? |
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Stan Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 120Inland Empire Southern California |
Serenity, you seem to feel, That now's the time for getting real. If you must and let it go... Trust your heart to tell you so. |
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Stan Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 120Inland Empire Southern California |
Serenity, you seem to feel, That now's the time for getting real. If you must and let it go... Trust your heart to tell you so. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
everything...I am? ascend... mascara traces on the lens tell me, I'll believe my friend... and be your lovely, loving whore. Each word I write, I have foresworn. And by the sacred of my mourn, my soul is naked--unadorned I pray that I may write---THE END. ===================== all I know is...you been completing me for a long time ... and I will RESTRAIN me moth self from any mascara jokes   (it aint easy being good ya know) love ya me twin of heart me No one ever told me ... I could get lost while standing still ... and sorrow doesnt make a sound ... as it takes away all your will. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
your mascara's running too? LOL... well, ain't that another mirror... this poem is completely wonderful.... as are you... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks for the disclaimer... now, can you hear the Applause? |
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