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You Are a Twist on... I Am

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


0 posted 01-07-2001 01:24 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for nakdthoughts

You Are a Twist on I Am

You are the desire in me...
the love that I crave.

I wonder what it is that you see in me,
that has not been viewed by others.

I hear in each of your breaths,
a sigh of longing.

I see you, your hand in mine,
walking under moonlights veil, come dark.

I want what you want, only
it doesn't come easy for me.

You are the desire in me...
the love that I crave.

We pretend that there is a future,
when there is only now.

To feel tomorrow's pull, tugs at my heart
tonight, weeping each yesterdays end.

I touch the mirror of you,
each time I look into my own eyes.

I worry that you feel
you are my "escape".

I cry at that thought, wishing
you knew it not to be true.

You are the desire in me...
the love that I crave.

You understand that tomorrow
cannot be controlled.  

You say you believe in me,
wishing the best for me,
even if it doesn't include you.

I dream that it would...

You try very hard, making time for me,
each second prolonged, mine wanting to savor.

To hope, is all
that I have left to hold onto.

You are the desire in me...
the love that I crave.


~Wynter




"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II




[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 01-07-2001).]
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Kethry
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1 posted 01-07-2001 01:55 AM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Well my twisted sister,
this is a brilliant write and I love what you've done with it.
Write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.


nakdthoughts
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2 posted 01-07-2001 02:04 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Kethry...as you can see I am up way past my bedtime (almost 2 a.m. here) I have been wanting to write this all day...but was too busy trying to finish painting my thoughts on my walls again..and covering my tracks with carpeting on my stairs, gold leafing my archways...and various other mind numbing activities to get me through these days...but finally I had this quietness, except for the humming sounds of my brain at work... thank you for reading, and I am enjoying your words tonight before I retire...

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II




[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 01-07-2001).]
Rex Allen McCoy
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3 posted 01-07-2001 02:28 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

A lovely read Wynter
I felt like I wanted to be there with you as I was caught up in your thoughts
Well done
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4 posted 01-07-2001 04:59 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Wynter~
This is quite a neat and unique twist.
Cleverly conceived.
~*Marge*~


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Irish Rose
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5 posted 01-07-2001 09:00 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

You are the desire in me...
                   the love that I crave."

find this and you don't need anything else!!!!!


"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 01-07-2001 09:47 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Rex ...I  wanted you to feel that way..it means it expressed my thoughts exactly...

thank you

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


nakdthoughts
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7 posted 01-07-2001 02:46 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

~*Marge*~ hmm thanks..I am a bit twisted in mind today..

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


Poeminister
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8 posted 01-07-2001 03:29 PM       View Profile for Poeminister   Email Poeminister   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poeminister's Home Page   View IP for Poeminister

I like this twister, beautifully written.  

Poeminister
nakdthoughts
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9 posted 01-07-2001 07:26 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Kathleen...I don't think I will ever find it again...


Poeminister- thank you..for the "beautiful"  

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


passing shadows
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10 posted 04-19-2004 04:20 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

neat write
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