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The Rumbly, Tumbly Song
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The Rumbly, Tumbly Song |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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The rumbly, in my tumbly Makes a scary sound I should not have had that apple crumbly Now to the loo I'm bound I think I have a tummy wog My stomach rumbles, grumbles As well, my head is in a fog so to the loo I stumbles. My tummy sings its opera long It kept me up all night I'd rather hear a different song As I awake to spew in fright With stomach in control I stagger forth and back I guess my tummy's on a roll "I wish I had not thought that!" Still one thing that makes me grin With tummy bug in tow The dress that I could not fit in Is now fit, to wear and go. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OOHHHHHH yuck girl...I dont know whether to laugh or....well never mind what else HAHAHAHA |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
K, HA,HA,HA,HA. I love this! Good to see someone lighten it up a bit. Keep 'em coming. HA,HA,HA! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Paula, I was going to make a reference to Pooh inspiration here but I thought that was going too far. Thanks for reading and not responding appropriately. Sorry, I missed you Krawdad, that would be because of my rush to...post a reply. Glad it made you smile. Keth< !signature--> Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 01-07-2001).] |
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Quiet One Junior Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 46Shhhhh |
LOL It's good to see this type of lighthearted writing, I'm glad I read this and believe me, I'll be back for another dose  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
awww, hope you are feeling better now...is it contagious, Kethry? been sneezing ever since I came on tonight  huggzz you..but from a distance~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Quiet one, trust me! you don't want another dose of this. nakdthoughts, I can't say if its contagious or not I have no-one to infect. Lean close to your screen and I will breathe if you get sick,...we'll know it's infectious.  Be well Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
LOL ... I've written a couple that could compliment this poem I used to write quite a few light-n-lively poems ... always enjoy reading these ... I hope you were overstepping the bounds of your present reality when you wrote this though |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rex, lol! it was because of the bounds of my present reality I wrote this. Writing takes my mind off my stomach and a number of other things that I won't go into here. Be well Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry love, it was the bread I made I know, I should never have made it with whole grains, oh sugar, (No love I won't say it) Wonderful piece love truly utterly smile bringingly wonderful I love this one as I always do. Now you have real talent kid, didn't I say that. Take care love and look after yourself Slushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hey Marsha No! I think it was the soup I made, salting it with tears will do it everytime.Lol be well you're swell Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
.....LOL Keth oh my god, what can I say Mmmmmm different girl very different I hope it's not going around (yuk) Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
tracie, well I feel a little different today! Do you think we should tell them Aussies have 101 words or phrases for vomit. *wink wink* Maybe not. Be well Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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