»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #11
»
My wish
| Open Poetry #11 |
|
My wish |
|
|
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
|
My wish I wish that I could write a poem to say just how i feel and even though the months gone by the pain is still too real I wish that I could tell you something I'd like to say good bye but every time I write the words it makes me want to cry words that are so simple yet so eloquently put freeze upon every page I write and are gone each time I look how can I describe who you were to me some things you have to leave alone sometimes just let things be when I heard about you death it caused me so much pain and I have to go on 'cause my life still remains I feel as if I've been swallowed by a tsunami at sea or is it more like mobius curve a line that's never free your earthly life may be over yes, that is true but you go on forever through the people that loved you so if you have the patience and I know you do one day I'll write the perfect poem and it will be just for you |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Slick, You've described this pain rather well. Thank you. I was on this very road not long ago. I set everything aside, knowing there was no hurry for her, and as I adjusted to it there came a time when it could be written quite naturally. Now, interestingly enough, when I think of her, I think of that poem, every time. |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Again...you did it again....hugs, lady. and "mobius curve"---you also draw? Another Slick poem, lady. |
||
|
dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Beautiful, that is all I can say. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
||
|
spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
This is a wonderful poem slick. A true tribute to your feelings. Nicely done Rich |
||
|
DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
The healing has started and will continue. |
||
|
Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is beautiful!!!! and the picture also!!!! "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
||
|
Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Good-bye dear Helen. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
