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The In-Betweens |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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We all are born and then we die Don't even know the reason why And that's the lot of all us human beings But there are times when God, at play, Will send some special thing our way... These things are what I call the "in-betweens". When we are positive for sure There is no more we can endure That Life's plan is to treat us cruel and mean There always seems to come some spark To help illuminate the dark And give our lives a needed "in-between". When those big problems seem to face us There is always some oasis Life will always place there in our path. Can be a lover or a friend Who we find as a perfect blend And makes us feel so happy we just laugh! Our troubles never stop, you know... One to another....on they go Our destiny is filled with traps unseen But, every time things get too hard God throws us down some small reward.. I thank him kindly for the in-betweens. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ What a perfectly lovely thought~ 'But, every time things get too hard God throws us down some small reward.. I thank him kindly for the in-betweens.' I'm going to remember this~ Thank you for sharing a gem. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Boy..I need to print this and tape it to my windshield to read every morning fighting with road ragers. Robert |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Our troubles never stop, you know... One to another....on they go Our destiny is filled with traps unseen But, every time things get too hard God throws us down some small reward.. I thank him kindly for the in-betweens. ====================== poetry ... Passions ... poets ... YOU and your wisdom ... just some of my in-betweens you know Im loving this one right? later-sweet & sincere-gator jm Am I loved by my words Will my vows weather the tide Bended knees can forsee all the rhythms of life And a heart can be held without pride ~Vante |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
You have woven a perfectly penned poetic piece describing the wondrous blessings of, as you've coined it, the 'in-betweens.' Love this! May a keep a copy? May I share with friends? |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
and may your "in-betweens" be long and full of love and laughter......wonderful thoughts here sweet man........  -SEA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So much better than your "lousy" post...I hope your in-betweens come a little more often... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you have inspired me to write romance poetry... and here it is..... "you'll never be my in-between... you pull the ends of all it seems together with the meaningful persistance glanced from shine to dull there is not any in-between you are my all.... no sights unseen" well... it's just poetry.....*sigh... wink* loveyou, baby... this is an awesome write.... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
An In-Between? Interesting idea. Some nice lines here When those big problems seem to face us There is always some oasis . . . and Our troubles never stop you know... One to another...on they go A good poem is an In-Between. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"When those big problems seem to face us There is always some oasis Life will always place there in our path. Can be a lover or a friend Who we find as a perfect blend And makes us feel so happy we just laugh!" I loved your thoughts in this Michael ... you have a wonderful spark of inspiration illuminated within these words. You echo thoughts I try to keep close as I'm waiting for my in-betweens to get me through the next round too ... great writing, and thanks for being "you" my friend.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
'Deer, well I can honestly say you have been an in between for me, an angel unaware, that crosses my day with moments of remember and leaves behind love's fragrance. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Our troubles never stop, you know... One to another....on they go Our destiny is filled with traps unseen But, every time things get too hard God throws us down some small reward.. I thank him kindly for the in-betweens. My in-betweens are taking too long to get here...nice thoughts, though B  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I deem it my duty to keep this on page one for awhile for everyone who needs an in-between. Thank you so much for this and for the wonderful poet and person you are! "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Our troubles never stop, you know... One to another....on they go Our destiny is filled with traps unseen But, every time things get too hard God throws us down some small reward.. I thank him kindly for the in-betweens. Deer~ I'm thanking him for the in-betweens and you for the oasis of your poetry...this was just what I needed to see the sunrise today and leave the darkness in last night~ Swim in the weave...don't examine it~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I sit and marvel at your creative rhyme You are the king of verse, no doubt And always a great tale or thought to write about Excellent again and again Liz |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
'Deer you are indeed a dear 'Deer, this is absolutely wonderful. Just what I needed to help me off the ground again Thank you muchly, you are one of my in betweens love Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
well these are wonderful thoughts.........they are so real ......wonderful done my friend. (((hugs))) Charisma |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Hi ya 'deer...it's me...one of them "in-betweens" that God (or maybe the devil threw up),....can ya read between the Toes?.....Nice poem...guess ya could say some of them "in betweens" are a real pain hunh? |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Nice work, Balladeer...Not many people realize the little things in between life's bigger moments. Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
I love this, I needed this and am so glad I read this. I now know what to call all of those.......... you know...the in-betweens! Thanks and lots of hugs for this one. Mother E |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I forgot to say God has a terrific sense of humor and He loves to play! Back to to the top for you! "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Lana Member
since 2000-12-26
Posts 68 |
Loved the poem. [This message has been edited by Lana (edited 01-08-2001).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
my thoughts exactly! nice work, deer  ) |
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