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The Power of Suggestion

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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale


0 posted 01-06-2001 10:14 PM       View Profile for A Whisper's Caress   Email A Whisper's Caress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for A Whisper's Caress

The Power Of Suggestion…

In the stillness of this quiet night
I lie alone, sleepless…thinking of you…

Feeling, with every bit of passion
that lies within me, nothing but love for you…

As my soul projects the warmth of my heart to yours
place your hand upon your chest and dare to feel my heartbeat…

Having once laid your head upon my breast
listen carefully and in the silence of your soul
you might hear my cries of longing…

Close your eyes and reach towards the heavens
and feel in the palm of your hand, the last
soft trace of my lips as we said goodbye…



Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
tracie66
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since 01-18-2000
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1 posted 01-06-2001 10:18 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

WOW!!!
This is a great write, so longing....well penned indeed
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Poeminister
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Regina SK; Canada


2 posted 01-06-2001 10:20 PM       View Profile for Poeminister   Email Poeminister   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poeminister's Home Page   View IP for Poeminister

"and feel in the palm of your hand, the last
soft trace of my lips as we said goodbye…"

A Whisper's Caress, its so nice to see you back at Passions.  A wonderful, soft peice this is.  Beautifully written.  Enjoyed muchly the read...

Poeminister



"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

Janet Marie
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3 posted 01-06-2001 10:56 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Feeling, with every bit of passion
that lies within me, nothing but love for you…

As my soul projects the warmth of my heart to yours
place your hand upon your chest and dare to feel my heartbeat…

==================
breathtaking ...
beautiful expression of love that extends beyond physical separation.
lovely emotional poem
take care
jm


Am I loved by my words
Will my vows weather the tide
Bended knees can forsee
all the rhythms of life
And a heart can be held without pride
~Vante
Mark Bohannan
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since 06-21-2000
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In the winds of Cherokee song


4 posted 01-06-2001 11:51 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Very powerful and emotional poem from you tonight.  Your words really send the impact of your love across the pages well.  Well written and expressed.
dragonpoe
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since 11-12-2000
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Palm Bay, Florida


5 posted 01-06-2001 11:54 PM       View Profile for dragonpoe   Email dragonpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dragonpoe

"Having once laid your head upon my breast
listen carefully and in the silence of your soul
you might hear my cries of longing…"
Beautiful lines there, and tho' I enjoyed the poem in its entirety, I really love that verse.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe
Sven
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6 posted 01-07-2001 02:33 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Whispering one. . . the power of these words. . . amazing. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.
A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale


7 posted 01-08-2001 11:17 PM       View Profile for A Whisper's Caress   Email A Whisper's Caress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Whisper's Caress

Everyone, Thank you so so much for
the very gracious replies.  


Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.


Lady Lightning
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since 12-04-2000
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Kentucky


8 posted 01-09-2001 12:54 AM       View Profile for Lady Lightning   Email Lady Lightning   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady Lightning

I loved this, much..So much emotions you"ve shown ..I could so feel the longing in this one..Wonderful write... ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown
passing shadows
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displaced


9 posted 04-19-2004 04:09 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

how sad
 
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