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The fleeting time reflected in my eyes..

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Master
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0 posted 01-06-2001 09:13 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

The fleeting time reflected in my eyes...
I broke the hourglass and as I gathered
the falling grains, I came to realize,--
time isnít slipping from our grasp, but rather,
itís building castles out of sand, along the sea,
where you and I can dwell eternally.


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Master
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1 posted 01-06-2001 11:56 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

any suggestions?
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2 posted 01-07-2001 12:12 AM       View Profile for dragonpoe   Email dragonpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dragonpoe

A delightful little peice of wisdom, gently said with a craft. I like it.

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3 posted 01-07-2001 09:44 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks Dragonpoe, glad you liked it!

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4 posted 01-07-2001 02:04 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

I like this one Master. . . it's excellent. . . I like too, the image of the hourglass and breaking it. . . we've all felt like doing that. . .

The idea that time doesn't slip through our fingers is my favorite though. . . time is what we make of it. . . and in choosing to make sandcastles, we make lives and memories that will live always. . .

I love it. . .it's perfect, don't change anything!!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.
Master
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5 posted 01-07-2001 03:35 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thank you Sven,

I'm glad you liked it!
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this is good...very good
 
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