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Sven
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0 posted 2001-01-06 08:19 PM


I never knew that the night was beautiful
until I saw it through your eyes
passionate eyes that pierced the darkness
finding my own eyes as they searched
searched for a heart in the black

you opened your arms and took me in
covered me in your warm, loving cloak
and in your arms, I found a haven
from the world of light that I left
to an indigo world, you welcomed me again

the stars began their crystalline melody
and you lifted my head to your face
bringing your lips to mine in a delicate touch
and we danced, danced through the night
and I was alive again. . . in our dark

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2001-01-06 08:22 PM


Sven love, WOW, this is utterly truly just amazingly beautiful. You really are excelling yourself love, you truly are. I really love this one, I truly do. Just magnificent love xx
Take care kid
               Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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2 posted 2001-01-07 11:13 AM


Did I mention this kind of work is my favorite of yours?   Love the night...and the mystery in it...
Beautiful work.  


Can I be your willful breeze,
Come to touch,
Your heart to ease?


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3 posted 2001-01-07 12:49 PM


Sven,
   ..."And I was alive again, in our dark". Haunting, enchanting, exquisite.
        Much love, Elise

Kethry
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4 posted 2001-01-07 12:59 PM


Sven,
Light or dark you always shine.  
Keth


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.


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5 posted 2001-01-07 01:37 PM


I pray that what you write is NOT a dream. You deserve a love 24hrs not just in your dreams.
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6 posted 2001-01-07 01:53 PM


awwww Sven each time I read you I am amazed at the beautiful words you write.....

Greeneyes~




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Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
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7 posted 2001-01-07 06:01 PM


Seems like the happiest times of my life were in the dark. This is wonderful.
Sandra

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8 posted 2001-01-07 06:29 PM


You might have the odd dalliance in the dark but Sven you are a child of the light, and you always shine so bright... Beautiful again with that mystical quality *sigh*
Isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.


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9 posted 2002-07-09 02:11 AM


You look good in this.


I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

passing shadows
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10 posted 2003-01-27 10:07 AM


yes, the night is beautiful!
Charisma
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11 posted 2003-01-27 02:52 PM


awwww Sven this is soooooooo beautifully penned....love it as always

Charisma

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12 posted 2003-02-23 10:17 PM


Doing some catchup PoetFriend Sven and I'm pleased to have come across this terrific poem you've shared...
Hugs2u
*~coco~*

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13 posted 2003-04-10 10:31 AM


WOW,MY FRIEND JUST LOVED IT
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