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Tight Black Dress (a little hot)
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Tight Black Dress (a little hot) |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Well my friends setting here alone tonight I was thinking what kind of a lady do I want to fall in love with. I think a lady that would do this just for me is the kind of lady I want. Tight Black Dress By Richard Maxfield 1-5-2001 Tight black dress Split up the side Not many secrets Doest it hide Clings so tight Reveling your shoulder Emotions wild I’m growing bolder Tall pointed heels Make legs taunt You’re driving me crazy My mind it haunts Your hair so perfect Dare I touch I can’t resist I love you too much Music playing By candle light I take your hand In dancing flight We spin in heaven I give you a dip From lips divine Love’s sweetest sip Cheek to cheek Thigh to thigh Pulling you closer Love’s gentle sigh Lost in your grace Our dancing trip Lips to your neck Hands on your hip You do this for me We are all alone For this our night To stay at home [This message has been edited by maxtec1 (edited 01-06-2001).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Richard love, is that my dress? Except mine glitters right! The shoes I can manage, and the hair, mine looks definitely ruffled tonight, but then it has been a very busy night here. Saturday nights are worse than Friday nights! This really is excellent love, I love it. I'm rising slowly maybe but rising nevertheless. Take care love Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
romantic!!! i know someone who dresses like this.... lol!... but where do you live? *wink*.... hehe... seriously, though, a lyrical write... enjoyed much! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thanks a lot Richard!!!  Now, I'll never be able to get this image out of my mind. . . *sigh*. . . lol Oh yeah, great poem!!  ------------------------------------------------------< !signature--> To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 01-06-2001).] |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Marsha, Your dress sounds like a delight. I close my eyes and see you in it. BIG SIGH. Thank you sweetie for your comment. Love and light, Richard Doreen and just whom might that be. You ladies have now engraved a picture in my brain. LOl and I love it. Thank you dear for your comment. love and light, Richard Seven, Well i had this picyure in my head haunting me and just had to share. LOL Thank you kind sir for your comment. Love anf light, Richard |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
I have the dress to take a chance just save me your last dance |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Im standing here arms open wide my exictment I can't hide you got the first and last LOl Thank you dear. Love and light, Richard |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
sorry..no tight black dresses in my closet but i have a black .....shhhhhh..haa ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I have a feeling I would like a black shh...haha. LOl thanks for you comment. Love and light, Richard |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sigh...and here I am, all dressed up and no where to go... loved this, Richard...*winks* |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you sweet lady for your comment. I get all dressed up and say I'm going to go out but most of the time I stay home. I so dislike the singles bars . they are like shark pits. Love and light, Richard |
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