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Breathe~
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0 posted 2001-01-06 05:38 PM


I am a pseudonym
hidden and secure
writing of heart break
failures and allure

In the real world
my voice fails me  
writing is my salvation
with words, I am free

I hunger something
I cannot identify
an endless quest
until I finally die

To love freely?
peace of mind?
I do not know
I am solution blind

I fear people
I fear myself
I fear love
I fear myself

I am a pseudonym...




I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan

© Copyright 2001 Denise Blackwell - All Rights Reserved
Parker
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1 posted 2001-01-06 05:40 PM


A very cool write...  

Loved it.

Parker

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-01-06 05:40 PM


And your honesty shines....well done!
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3 posted 2001-01-06 05:45 PM


wonderful penned....enjoyed the read...  

((hugs))
Charisma

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4 posted 2001-01-06 06:33 PM


very creative breathe..nicely written..enjoyed very much HUGS..

            ~V~



A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Poeminister
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5 posted 2001-01-06 07:01 PM


"I hunger something
I cannot identify"

I can relate to that muchly...Wonderfully expressed and written piece.  Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe


Breathe~
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 315
Washington...
6 posted 2001-01-06 09:40 PM


Thank you all...

When I wrote this...I had no idea what was going to come out...   It was very enlightening...


I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan

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