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Parker
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0 posted 2001-01-06 05:36 PM


I Am Canadian

I am Canadian….
   I have no doubt that that is me.  

I am North American….
   I have a bigger family just south of me.  

I am of the Western world….
   I also have some friends just east of me.  

I am life on Planet Earth…..
   I love that all of you are here with me.  

I am of the Milky Way…..
   I often hope that this is not the only place.  

I am just a single man…..
   I dream of Love in the stars I see.

I am here and wait for thee…
   I know your out there seeking me  

I Am Canadian….
   I have no doubt that that is me.  

James Parker Haley  Jan 6, 2001


© Copyright 2001 James Haley - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-01-06 05:39 PM


And you wear and share it well! Challenge met!
Charisma
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2 posted 2001-01-06 05:43 PM


whooohoooo....love this one...Canadian.
oh my ...you make me smile  
love your style

((Hugs))
Charisma

Poeminister
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3 posted 2001-01-06 06:40 PM





I'm Canadian too and like this muchly.  You met the challenge superbly.  Nicely done.

Poeminister





[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-06-2001).]

raleighbttrfly
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4 posted 2001-01-06 07:09 PM


i like the twist you put on this chalenge nicely done




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Martie
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5 posted 2001-01-06 08:11 PM


Hi Parker--You are a sweet man with a lovely sense of humor who writes poetry sublime..and sees the beauty of a rose...(I think its time for the smile to loose the santa hat...how about you?)  
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6 posted 2001-01-06 08:24 PM


Parker~
Nicely done, my Canadian friend.
Welcome to my universal heart.
~*Marge*~


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7 posted 2001-01-06 10:03 PM


Hey, Parker! We got a bunch of your friends down here right now...would you send a bus for them...please???  
tracie66
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8 posted 2001-01-06 10:20 PM


James~
I love your answer to the challenge, so well penned and a wonderful read, well done
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe



Kit McCallum
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9 posted 2001-01-07 12:32 PM


Wonderful James ... from another happy fellow Canadian ... you've met the challenge well!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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10 posted 2001-01-07 12:40 PM


hey there canada    i like the way you revised the challenge..made it your own  

still dreaming under the stars aye...

(ROFL @ MARTIE about her santa hat...!!)

hugs, g

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11 posted 2001-01-07 03:34 AM


PARKER, I got a sweet smile upon reading your reply to challenge...
And now to a fellow Canuk, I raise a chilled labatt blue RAH RAH your poem is cool!!!


Suzanne Arlene
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12 posted 2001-01-07 09:39 AM


And here i thought it was gonna be like the beer commercial lol. I loved it.From a fellow  Canadian     Suzanne
Kethry
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13 posted 2001-01-07 02:36 PM


James,
I loved your creative expression of I am. Although your rhythm and metre made it way to close to a tune on Aussie television "I am you are, we are Australian" Now I'm gonna be singing it all day and night. Thanks!


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.


Marina
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14 posted 2001-01-07 07:17 PM


This is like...totally awesome EH!!

Being a fellow Canadian myself, I certainly have to agree with all of the above.  I can almost picture you standing on the stage and performing this in commercial in between the Leaf games ( God help me!.  

This calls for Canadian Lager eh....and it's your buy too eh!!  

So Take off Eh!!!  

Marina


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Marina Crossley



Parker
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15 posted 2001-01-08 01:19 PM


Sunshine, thank you.  
Charisma, thank you.  
Poeminister, thanks canuck.  
raleighbttrfly, thank you.  
Martie, thank you sweet poet.  
Marge, oh so I have to share it with everybody else...  
Balladeer, I sent them down to keep you company and bring you real beer.  
tracie66, thank you.  
Kit, thanks canuck.  
dg, thanks sweets... I just forgot to read the rules....  
CocoBaci, thanks canuck.  
Suzanne, thanks canuck.  
Kethry, we don't get your commercials up here, but it sure sounds like one of ours...these companies steal each other's
Marina, you are at that, so take off eh!

Parker

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