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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-01-06 04:08 PM



From Ember To Flame
~*Marge Tindal*~

~
~The~
~firey~
~smolder~
~just got bolder~
~A lifeless ember of~
~ashened-remember~
~Sparking to life~
~on new breeze~
~of you~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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1 posted 2001-01-06 04:21 PM


Marge~

Beautiful and enchanting . . . like the flame itself . . .

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Charisma
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2 posted 2001-01-06 04:34 PM


*wow* Marge....you have a fiery spirit..love it....love this flame.

((hugs))
Charisma

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3 posted 2001-01-06 04:37 PM


Margie girl this is as always a delight. You are ever creative and always always wonderful
And yes I love it too
Take care love
             Mushy
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2001-01-06 04:48 PM



As
the
flicker
brightens
in the intensity
of the heart so
does the glow
upon the
smile
of
those in it's
luminance and
wherein melting
of two hearts now
combine to feed a
growing pattern of
reflection to soften
the darkness of the
night.  The dancing
of the flame becomes
the rythm tossing the
swirls of minds aloft
as their gazes lock in
that moment of such
realization that this is
where that first spark
was intended to find
itself as it broke the
silence of heartache
and fueled the beginning of a new birthing
to the love that two souls were created to exist
as one from this moment to the ending of eternity

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-01-06 04:59 PM


LoneWolf~
I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it.
Thanks for letting me know.

Charisma~
Awwww !  Thank you, my friend.

Marsha~
*Hugs* to you for a sweet reply.

MarkB~
You can fan my embers anytime !
The spirit of you - dances in the flame !
Have I told you today ? ... Well, I do !

Awesomely inspired reply, love.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Poeminister
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6 posted 2001-01-06 05:44 PM


I like this smolder into flaming boulder.  Lovely, sparkling, piece.  

Poeminister

doreen peri
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7 posted 2001-01-06 06:03 PM


this one's HOT!



fan the fire!!! watch it rise!!
flamin' poetry here, girl!

Kethry
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8 posted 2001-01-06 06:21 PM


Marge,
and I thought smokin' was supposed to be bad for ya.
Write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2001-01-06 06:21 PM


PoeMinister~
Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it.

Doreen~
LOVE those little flaming smiley's !

*On a side-note ...
We are so dry here in Florida,
that the raging brush fires have started again.
Too close for comfort here.
So maybe the smoke got in my eyes on this one.

Kethry~
You sneaked in under a smoke-screen on me !
Thanks, gal.
~*Marge*~
< !signature-->

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                       noles1@totcon.com       


[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 01-06-2001).]

BloomingRose
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10 posted 2001-01-06 06:22 PM



The fire burns bright in this one Marge!
May the flames ever burn images of poetry in the pages of your gifted mind.
Love ya girl,
Deb

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In Your Poetic Mind
11 posted 2001-01-06 06:32 PM


Marge~ not many have the talent to say so much with so few words, this is lovely....I do enjoy your words much.....


Greeneyes~


***


"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown


Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2001-01-06 09:33 PM


BloomingRose~
Glad you caught a glimpse of the roaring flame.

GreenEyes~
I thank you so very much.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

tracie66
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13 posted 2001-01-06 09:43 PM


Margie~
This may be tiny, but it says a great deal
Tracie~
Lovely flame sweetie  


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2001-01-30 11:41 PM


Tracie~
Glad I came back to find your sweet reply.
Thank you sooooooo much.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Honeybee
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15 posted 2001-08-02 12:18 PM


I can't believe I missed this one the first time  

Wonderful, Marge, you know how much I love shape poems - and you're the master of them    Excellent thought within this, with a great presentation!~

Melissa~

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16 posted 2003-01-27 10:23 AM


remember the ember
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