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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-01-06 01:45 PM


I Dreamed I Loved You
By: Noah Eaton
1/2/01

I saw you standing on the sea shore
Breathing the soothing sea breeze
You turned as you saw my shadow, and then your spirits soared
As you laughed with cheer, and reached for me

Two peas in a pod, ripened in the sunlight of loves passion
At last I hold you close to my heart
A spontaneous combustion of ecstacy sparks in me, filled of affection
I burst in tears, knowing I’ve finally found you, after searching so hard

Oh love, never again will we yearn to find each other
I am here for you, the wait is over
You and I cheer in felicity together as we hold each other
Devoted souls we are, finally together

I feel your soft warm skin as I touch your neck
You touch my face with your hand and drag your fingers down my lips
We lean in together to kiss each other, under this romantic tropical sunset
You lay me on the sand, I hold you close, kissing in the birth of loves wish

I can feel your warm breath caressing at my neck, as I look into your eyes
As I sigh knowing that we were complete together, at last
We make love to each other as our hearts melt into one under passions skies
Speaking words to each other, kissing each other, as we roll across the sand

I wake up, sad to see it was just another dream
Oh love, don’t worry, I will find you soon
It’s just a matter of time, just a little longer, before we meet
Just know that I’ve always loved you, and I will always love you

I dreamed I loved you…



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1 posted 2001-01-06 02:11 PM


I hold you close, kissing in the birth of loves wish

very nice, Noah  

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-01-06 02:15 PM


"Oh love don't worry
I will find you soon."
Loved the title and every word...excellent writing...touching my heart...James

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3 posted 2001-01-06 02:17 PM


Hey Soulbrother,
Another smash hit poem from you and very beautiful. You really ignite my passions as you and me are both on the same boat here and waiting for destiny.
Bilal

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4 posted 2001-01-06 04:02 PM


bautiful and passionate poem, I liked it very much, AP
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5 posted 2001-01-07 11:05 AM


Thank you all for your wonderful comments, they all are so wonderful!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2001-01-08 09:12 PM


how funny that i was just writing something very similar!  
ah..what wonderful poets we must be..LOL  

this is a great one..and such an awesome, catching title..  

hugs, g

ps..gotta love this line!:
"A spontaneous combustion of ecstacy sparks in me..."


"there is no 'best' in a world of individuals"
-unknown


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