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I Am......serenity's challenge
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I Am......serenity's challenge |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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~IAm~ I am a free spirited soul I wonder where my spirit comes from I hear angel wings caressing I see them floating along I want to fly with them, high above the clouds I am a free spirited soul ~~~ I pretend I've started on my journey I feel myself begin to float I touch the air caressing it I worry I will not cope I cry for those who lose their way I am a free spirited soul ~~~ I understand that we can lose our way I say, "live one day at a time" I dream that my spirit free's me I try not to hold onto yesterday I hope the gentle angels guide me I am a free spirited soul ~~~ I'm sorry I know this is not fantastic but I wanted to attempt the challenge...thanks for reading ~HUGS~ ~Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
You met the challenge beautifully. Very well done. Poeminister |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Tracie!! It's just great and I've read quite a bit of your work and I think it describes you well! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
what do you mean this isnt fantastic... its YOU .. you sincerely captured the Tracie we see and adore in your poetry... so yes it is fantastic!! later-angel-girlie-gator  jm  Am I loved by my words Will my vows weather the tide Bended knees can forsee all the rhythms of life And a heart can be held without pride ~Vante |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
P~ Thank you very much, appreciate you reading Thanks Tracie~ Ethome~ WOW!!! thanks so much for that, your words have made me smile...see  ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Oh Janny girl you know how to make me feel good....thanks hon, I truly think this is not so great but you make me feel good about it with lovely comments like that...thanks That graphic is truly devine Thanks  ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Tracie, I think this is fab...how could we not love it? It's YOU!!! back to the top now...and take a bow lady...HUGS to you. And the format was done perfectly too. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my..you sound wonderful free.... love it...free spirit soul |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I really liked this poem. I can relate to your words. Good writing. Love and light, Richard |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tracie love, what do you mean not fantastic, it's sensational, it's manifique, formadable, c'est tres tres bon! Mais qui mademoiselle, c'est tres bien. It is as always love a beautiful piece from you, utterly wonderful and I love it. It is Tracie Take care kid Mushy MM Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tracie, this is the best the very, best and it is you to a "t". Very, very well done! Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~  Your spirit soars freely across the miles Sharing ~Winged Hugs~ and giving lots of smiles I know I have received my share of the wonderful smiles that your ~Angel Heart~ wears LOVE YOU ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
tracie, you are a free spirited soul and it shows so much in your poetry. This piece is great for any challenge. Parker |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Tracie, I'd say not only did you meet the challenge but you did so with your usual style and wonderful grace. this was beautiful my friend and full so much of YOU take care ~amy~ ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
this is my favorit answer to this chalenge i hav found so far. i thought it was FAB! I am not always lonely even if I am always alone |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is definietly you my friend. . . and it's wonderful. . . just like you. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
TRACIE, I'm elated you did the challenge I was dying of curiousity to peak at your response... And now I have read I'm honored to make your acquaintance... You're such a sweet PoetFriend with a heart of gold (to coin a phrase from someplace...) Hugs2UalwaysMyFriend |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I already knew you were fantastic ... it's been evident since I first came to Passions and the poem is wonderful too |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Tracie....why are you sorry? This is beautiful. You are what you are, yes? And that makes it even more beautiful. I enjoyed it and thought it was great! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
I am feeling very lazy and I was going to do a group thank-you but I just can't here goes: Seren~ You sweet gal...thanks honey bun for those lovely comments, I appreciate YOU very much ~HUG~ Tracie~ Charis~ Sweetie you know what it's like free one minute not the next, this is how my poetry makes me feel, it's where I love to escape to, my free spirited soul. ~HUG~ Tracie~ Richard~ I'm glad you can relate and that you liked it..thanks for your comments ~HUG~ Tracie~ Hey my sweet mushy friend, you are so appreciated and don't you forget it...thanks for stopping by with those most delightful words ~HUG~ Tracie~ Hey Keth, wonderful reply hon I appreciate them and you always ~HUG~ Tracie~ Margie~ my adorable friend, I guarantee you will recieve many more hon Your spirit soars freely across the miles Sharing ~Winged Hugs~ and giving lots of smiles I know I have received my share of the wonderful smiles that your ~Angel Heart~ wears this is so beautiful and I thank you so much, you always brighten my day Margie girl ~HUG~ Tracie~ James~ Thanks so much for that reply, know that it is appreciated ~HUG~ Tracie~ Little Aimster how much those words mean to me from you...thanks hon very much ~HUG~ Tracie~ raleighbttrfly~ WOW!!! thanks alot, I'm glad you liked it ~HUG~ Tracie~ Sven~ Thanks so much my friend ~HUG~ Tracie~ Awww Coco I'm glad you liked what you read, dying out of curiosity hey...well I'm glad I didn't disappoint...thanks ~HUG~ Tracie~ Rex~ I feel the same, you have always been my friend from my very first appearance in passions and I both appreciate and admire you my friend...thanks ~HUG~ Tracie~ Irie~ This is a lovely reply...thanks very much for that, appreciate it ~HUG~ Tracie~ Thanks to all of you, I love being a part of passions and knowing all of you, every one of you are the most finest poets ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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