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Stan
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since 2001-01-01
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Inland Empire Southern California

0 posted 2001-01-06 01:26 AM



   .....one single word

Lady, all I have's a word
  to lay a gift before you...
    a word I'm sure you've never heard,
      though many must adore you.

For you have qualities so rare
  that they in contrast all outshine
   rare jewels! And whate'er you wear,
     flowers fade beside your features fine.

If I were rich and I could bring you
  rare perfumes, ...exotic pets,
    they'd just diminish in your view
      as more of old familiar nets.

So, I'll come squarely to the point.
  I bring a word no rival can endure!
    A word that saints use to anoint,
      a word all maladies to cure!

A word so powerful in scope
  that you must yield your very soul!
    A word that now I more than hope
      will win your heart and take its toll.

And that one word for decades that I sought,
   ...and found at last! ...now I forgot.
      
  



© Copyright 2001 Stan Colburn - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2001-01-06 01:29 AM


Oh man...........I needed to know that word too.  Darn it anyway.  This was .......well in one word........."Fantasmagical".

Loved it and you caught me with the ending.

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2001-01-06 01:32 AM


Ok..you got me on this one!! And you must know that I collect dictionaries..I have almost 100 of them..so if you need a word, I'll see if I can find it.    
Stan
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Inland Empire Southern California
3 posted 2001-01-06 01:51 AM


Ha Ha Gotcha!
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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4 posted 2001-01-06 03:42 AM


OOOHHH...I know...it's, it's---

"serenity..."

ROFL...HUMOR ME!!!!!

love and smooches,
(does bribery work?)

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2001-01-06 04:08 AM


Oh you sneak you! You got me going with all these womderful poetic romantic lines and then you dumped me into the recycle bin... he he I loved ...I might know the word but I'd hate to be wrong...ethome
Beki
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since 1999-09-15
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Newport Beach, CA, USA
6 posted 2001-01-06 07:03 AM


ROFL  God I love a poem that surprises me in the end...you think you know where it's headed and then you get there and SHAZAAM!
Good one STan  

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2001-01-06 08:09 AM


Stan the Man...one look at her and you were rendered speechless....sigh...
Stan
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since 2001-01-01
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Inland Empire Southern California
8 posted 2001-01-06 08:01 PM


Serenity, Beki, ethome and Sunshine,  thank you all for the chance to tease you. I promise I won't do this to you again.  (devious eyes lowered smile)
Siofra
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State of Suspended Passion
9 posted 2001-12-11 07:32 AM


Refreshing humor in this.   Miss you around here!  

I am many.

passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2003-01-27 10:17 AM


hehehe...love this!
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