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Aimster
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0 posted 2001-01-05 10:50 PM


"Will You?"

The day I looked into your eyes of blue
I knew I'd never be the same
With one kiss and touch of cupid's arrow
Fell madly in love with you, engulfed by passions flame

Over time and distance my love has only grown stonger and more true
As each day passes
And time ticks by
I fall harder and more in love with you

Forever doesn't seem long enough
To share this life together
But that is how long I will stand by your side
Today, always, forever

I want you to be my wife
The mother of my children too
From the seed of friendship
This wonderful love blossomed and grew

My hand is outstreched
If you'll place yours into mine
I promise to love you today
And until the end of time

Without you I'd be loss
Like a ship tossed in open sea
I'd never quite recover
Certainly I wouldn't me

You are my everything
The very air that I breathe
I never really thought love was for me
But now you've made me believe

Will you spend forever with me
This simple question I ask to you
Everyday I pray that you love me
As much as I love you.

~amy m kennedy~


~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~


© Copyright 2001 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2001-01-05 11:08 PM


Well...what was the answer??? Or have the question been "asked" yet?? Heck just pass this along and I'm sure you'll get the answer you want!! Well done.

jwesley

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-01-05 11:19 PM


heart and soul Amy-girl ...
ya write with your heart and soul on high ...
this is beautiful in its sincerety
so great to see your name here again sweets
Happy New Year me girlie-girl
love to ya
JM

Am I loved by my words
Will my vows weather the tide
Bended knees can forsee
all the rhythms of life
And a heart can be held without pride
~Vante

ParisGrl
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3 posted 2001-01-05 11:37 PM


YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2001-01-05 11:40 PM


Sounds so much like a duet, Aimster...I enjoyed this one a lot!...
Kethry
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5 posted 2001-01-05 11:42 PM


Amy,
stunning for all the right reasons.
Keth.


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
6 posted 2001-01-06 12:54 PM


Amy, this was truely spoken from a heart in love and not only that, it jumps off the page with passion.  Wonderful to see you back with us.  
Aimster
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Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
7 posted 2001-01-06 05:28 PM


thank you all for your wonderful
and heartfelt replies. it is so
great to be back amongst such fine
talent and amazing people! i have missed
you all much. i won't be able to post
like i use to but i am going to try to
read and post as much as my now busy
life will allow me. love ya all

amk

~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~


Sven
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8 posted 2001-01-06 08:09 PM


well, now that I've seen the answer. . . I'll send this back to the top. . .

much love to both of you. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Marsha
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9 posted 2001-01-06 08:14 PM


Amy love, I said you'd been missed and you have this is as always beautiful utterly beautiful.
Welcome home love,
Take care
                Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Marsha
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10 posted 2001-01-06 08:18 PM


And I forgot to put this in my library love, and I knew the answer would be yes. I'm so very very pleased for you love.
Take care
I did say i loved this didn't I
              good
                   Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Aimster
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Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
11 posted 2001-01-09 07:31 PM


thanks again to everyone who read
and posted to this. time limits me
to be able to thank you all individually
but i did want to say each of you has
a forever place in my heart as this is
my second home.
love ya.
take care
amy

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