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spiked
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0 posted 2001-01-05 10:33 PM



What turns the gears that run your mind
Combining dreams and love entwined
Beneath your eyes you hide so well
All that you feel, I just can’t tell
If what I say contains some truth
Or is it just some whimsy view
I have so much I want to learn
All subtle things beyond concern
That give a glimpse of what you are
Driving desire, wanting more
More of what you seem to fear
Beyond the way that things appear
Confess the things we hide away
Share all the thought we need to say
An angel flies with me tonight
I fare the well along this flight
That which I long to be.

© Copyright 2001 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-01-05 11:54 PM


and there within the shadow
of a mighty angel's fall...
lay a man of wing unplanned
and so it's so, with all...
we blunder and we fall from height
and all of cursing strength of might
cannot stave us to the shelf
and cannot save us from ourselves...

love to you, rich.

brian madden
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ireland
2 posted 2001-01-06 03:16 PM


What turns the gears that run your mind
Combining dreams and love entwined

a great write, enjoyed reading.  

An angel flies with me tonight
I fare the well along this flight
That which I long to be.

There's a feeling of contentment Now that you are here I feel satisfied I belong
inside Your velvet heaven" Depeche mode

spiked
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3 posted 2001-01-07 12:38 PM


Wonderful addition serene
Thanks Brian

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
4 posted 2001-01-08 10:14 PM


this is so beautiful...........& an angel does fly with you
spiked
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5 posted 2001-01-09 04:04 AM


Thank You slick, I'll try and remember that.
Rich

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