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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-01-05 08:31 PM


I Am (Sunshine’s Challenge)
By: Noah Eaton
1/5/01

I am a recently awakened soul
Sideswiped at the crossroads of my dreams in search for joy
I’m still longing for love, longing for respect
As I continue to face the loneliness and pain around me
I am different from much other people, but that’s what makes me special
I am just a small sparrow willing to sing my songs of love to the world
I’ve barely ever traveled around the world, no girls have ever talked with me
I am still longing to see my dreams come true…

But I am not the same hopeless soul I used to be
I am never going to give up, because I have a lot of love to give
I am going to keep moving on, and let love guide me forever
I am happy now, I am ready…

I am here to live life to the fullest
I am here to share my love with all of you
I am here to make my dreams come true and find my love
For I am…I am me

I am not going to waste my life, there is so much to see, so much to do
And I know that there is a true love for everyone in the world
And I know that you will find it, and love will forever flourish with you
If you ever feel down or confused, don’t despair, I believe in you
In all this time, all my love is just a dream, but I know that the time will come
When I am pleasantly surprised to see my girl walk in reality
For I know that everyone belongs to one another, everyone has a shared love
A love that will heal you of your misery, a love that will make you happy

I am here for you love, soon I will find you
I am here to make you happy, for I want you to be the happiest girl that you can be
I am alive, you, my friend, are alive, all of us are here
I am here to love and share my magic with you

I am here to live life to the fullest
I am here to find true love in the world
I am here to listen to all your wonderful words and thoughts
For I am here to live…I am


© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-01-05 08:59 PM


Just beautiful, m'friend...everytime I read? I get the shivers in me soul...just absolutely exquisite sharing...grin...is like this challenge has become the "passions name tag"---and I am delighted to meet you!
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2 posted 2001-01-05 09:12 PM


You met the challenge wonderfully.  Very well done.

Poeminister

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-01-05 10:38 PM


Thank you for your wonderful comments, Serenity and Poeminister, they were much appreciated!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kethry
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4 posted 2001-01-05 10:48 PM


Mistletoe Angel,
you are not a sparrow at all, you are indeed a lark singing your song, high and free, for all to see.

write on in song
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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5 posted 2001-01-06 12:49 PM


Noah~

'I am just a small sparrow willing to sing my songs of love to the world'

And I hear the twittering of your heart,
bursting forth in great song.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-01-06 12:51 PM


Thank you Kethry and Marge for your encouraging comments. You enlighten my days with your sweet songs too!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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