How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #11 Archive
 Echo of a passion
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Echo of a passion

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 12-22-2000
Posts 6147
standing on a shadow's lace


0 posted 01-05-2001 07:35 PM       View Profile for 1slick_lady   Email 1slick_lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit 1slick_lady's Home Page   View IP for 1slick_lady

         Echo of a passion


  I have a passion
  It has an echo
  Hear it strongest
  When you are near
  Disturbs my sleep
  Makes me weak
  Arms that wait
  Thighs that ache
  You free my soul
  I'm out of control
  Feeling echoes
  Of lovers secrets
  That start with desire
  And end in fire

© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
dragonpoe
Senior Member
since 11-12-2000
Posts 617
Palm Bay, Florida


1 posted 01-05-2001 07:38 PM       View Profile for dragonpoe   Email dragonpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dragonpoe

Very nice! Loved each line.


With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 02-02-2000
Posts 28839


2 posted 01-05-2001 07:42 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Very nice, indeed...and UNDERSTOOD each line...echoes...a reverberation of our own call...this one runs deep for me, m'friend...

You continue to amaze me...
Beki
Senior Member
since 09-15-99
Posts 1615
Newport Beach, CA, USA


3 posted 01-05-2001 07:44 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

nicely spokwn  
Breathe~
Member
since 02-05-2000
Posts 319
Washington...


4 posted 01-05-2001 07:44 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

"Oooooh"...

Down right steamy in here!

Nice flow and I loved the ending...

I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan
doreen peri
Member Rara Avis
since 05-25-99
Posts 8028
Virginia


5 posted 01-05-2001 07:57 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

"start with desire
and end with fire"

awesome!!! this one's HOT!


what a great longing write... !!
.... it's good when you don't worry about getting burned... i'm concerned about that myself sometimes... *sigh*.... but i say, write your heart because that's the power of writing... and this is a powerful write... good work.

welcome to Passions.... it's a hot place! keep your fire extinguisher handy! rofl




[This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 01-05-2001).]
maxtec1
Senior Member
since 12-09-2000
Posts 587
Garland, Tx


6 posted 01-06-2001 06:41 AM       View Profile for maxtec1   Email maxtec1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit maxtec1's Home Page   View IP for maxtec1

OH gees how did I miss this one. I loved it lady. It was short but there was a lne in it that got me going.(well more than one)
Love and light,
Richard
Agust P
Member
since 12-29-2000
Posts 161


7 posted 01-06-2001 07:00 AM       View Profile for Agust P   Email Agust P   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Agust P

beutiful peom

"Feeling echoes
  Of lovers secrets
  That start with desire
  And end in fire"

I liked this one, thanks AP
ethome
Member Patricius
since 05-14-2000
Posts 11545
New Brunswick Canada


8 posted 01-06-2001 07:13 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

HOT STUFF!  that echo is coming back strong and clear.....and there's a fire burning there.... good write!
Parker
Member Elite
since 01-06-2000
Posts 3135
... the old black rum


9 posted 01-06-2001 05:09 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Well, I love the way you echo your passion. I think I'd love to hear more of those echo's ..... for sure.  

Parker
spiked
Senior Member
since 01-13-2000
Posts 886
Hammond, La USA


10 posted 01-07-2001 12:36 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

I long to hear echos. Wonderful write.
Rich
1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 12-22-2000
Posts 6147
standing on a shadow's lace


11 posted 01-07-2001 01:54 PM       View Profile for 1slick_lady   Email 1slick_lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit 1slick_lady's Home Page   View IP for 1slick_lady

thank you ....I'm glad you all liked this .....and i can hear your echoes
DonFurr
Member
since 01-01-2001
Posts 176
Monticello IN


12 posted 01-07-2001 03:53 PM       View Profile for DonFurr   Email DonFurr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DonFurr

With this you speak of something we all feel and long to feel again. Something we wish to remember or make memories of.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 08-26-99
Posts 46297
displaced


13 posted 04-19-2004 04:21 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #11 >> Echo of a passion Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors