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Inspirations and Subtle Echos |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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There is an evening soon coming, That awaits my favors. It calls me away, To lands where I know, Only the mystery of the shadows. Bound by all the sleepless boundaries, I go blindly, Letting my faith in its inspiration, Guide me through with sure hands. If I ride by night, To your doorstep, Would you then come to greet me? And smiling, Would you step away with me, For the sake of passion? If I come by day, Would you slumber with me, In such odd hours, So that we might meet our fate, In the rush of winter wind, And the cloak of shadowing cover While speaking... Might I hear your voice, Tuned with mine? While speaking, Our voices tuned together, How would we then dance? For the night follows, An arrangement of notes, Only known to the truest ears. Among the imposters who call themselves, Lovers of the night, Shall we then stand, Declaring our leadership, And rule, In a land that seemed created only, For us? Take my hand now, If indeed we have truly met. Take my heart now, If by wonders untold you could. Take my words now An offering to you. Have me now, A part of me belongs to your will. Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Among the imposters who call themselves, Lovers of the night, Shall we then stand, Declaring our leadership, And rule, In a land that seemed created only, For us? A beautifully written poem, loved it, and could hear my own sweet heart uttering such words to me and I responding with the same words. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Brian, Thank you. I am glad you found something that stood out for you in it too.  Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Brian, Thank you. I am glad you found something that stood out for you in it too. Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a wonderfully introspectively pensive piece, Temptress... Nicely done..  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Thanks, Nan. Coming from you, that compliment certainly is worth more than you realize. Thanks for reading my work as of late. Its nice to have the opinion and thoughts of someone I respect so much. Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a look into the heart of inspiration. . . could we please have another look??  this is wonderful. . . absolutely wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TemptyOne~ I really enjoyed this thought~ 'How would we then dance? For the night follows, An arrangement of notes, Only known to the truest ears.' Ahhhh ! And would-be lovers make their own music. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Sven, Thank you. You may. Marge, Thank you. I love how I can always count on you to read. Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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