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Open Poetry #11

No time

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

0 posted 2001-01-05 12:17 PM

This was supposed to be a "I Am" poem but this came out.

NO TIME

I don’t cry
I have no time for that
I must keep on running
faster and faster
I have no time
to cry

I don’t ask
why?
and
where to?

there is pain
but I have no time for it
I must keep on running
I must do
what I’m told to do
I have no time
for pain

and most of all
I have no time
to die
so I must keep on living
forever!

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-01-05 01:09 PM

I for one am glad that this one came out. It was superbly done and sometimes it is when we least expect it that one of this caliber just bursts through. Wonderful read.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

2 posted 2001-01-05 03:03 PM

You are right, we can't dwell on the negative or the pain, or we might go insane. Better to say, no time, and go forward.
Thanks for this one. I needed it!
Deb

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2001-01-05 03:11 PM

I'm glad your muse didn't follow directions. *S* This is superb!

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

4 posted 2001-01-05 05:38 PM

hi, thank you so much for your comment Mark Bohannan, it feels so good to hear words like yours and thanks to you BloomingRose and suthern, I'm gaining new and wonderful friends at Passions! AP

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