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I Am challenge
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I Am challenge |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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i am a shy introvert in an exuberant exterior i wonder how people think of me i hear the devil imploring me to rebel i see my memories, reminding me of who i am i want to seek true uncorrupted happiness i am a shy introvert in an exuberant exterior i pretend i am a star basking in the center stage i feel uncertainty engulf my existence i touch sacred words, allowing them to heal i worry this sheltered froggie might never experience life i cry for the lies we are dealing with daily i am a shy introvert in an exuberant exterior i understand that you reap what you sow i say life is what we make of it i dream about making a difference i try to be sincere and honest i hope to break the confines of my barriers one day, for i am a shy introvert in an exuberant exterior [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
kaile, I'm so glad you joined in the challenge! You did good! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
kaile...this is great...you turned this into a personal creed. And I love the "use" of lower case i--indicating small interior voice...terrific job with this... i worry this sheltered froggie might never experience life I related very strongly to that. Again, great job! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~May I print this? It's arresting. Such a neat read. Thank you truly for sharing. *Peace. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Kaile, Wonderful and so honest, thank you, it so nice to get to know you better, wonderfully done. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
kaile wonderful done my friend....you met the challenge very well. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I can relate to this muchly, especially in being shy. Capitally done. Poeminister |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
kethry,im glad i joined in too..its been enlightening peering into my soul and into other people's as well...  serenity, im glad you liked the little "i"...yup, i do have a small interior voice but hope this voice will grow louder someday  spitfire, im honoured that you thought this worthy of printing...thank you..you really made my day cerenity, thanx for the compliment and it was nice getting to know you better too charisma,thanx for reading and for the reassurance poeminister, kindred spirits are we..nice to see another self-professed shy guy grace the forums here..*winkz* thank you all  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kaile~ Challenge well met, I enjoyed this glimpse of you........very cool. -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
i am a shy introvert in an exuberant exterior ================== what a very cool line... as is this i touch sacred words, allowing them to heal creative and sincere answer to the challenge kaile... I think of the many Ive read...yours is one that held the most surprises. Im glad to get to know more about you. later-lil-Haiku-gator jm |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Well, there's nothing shy about your quill .... Wonderful expression of self. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
kaile..much enjoyed reading you..an interesting fellow isnt it amazing what we start to realize about ourselves while we write these 'i am' poems! mine was two days long when i first wrote it--haha!! (had to shorten considerably!)great poem friend! hugs, g "there is no 'best' in a world of individuals" -unknown |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanx all for reading im sorry for not thanking each and every one of you individually but i am now in a hurry so forgive me? [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 01-08-2001).] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, An honset introspection, presonifying the struggles of innocent youth, struggling to make a way into this corrupt world, while hanging onto integrity, and making a difference. Hold on to your ideals my friend! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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