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Waterfalls.....haiku

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Charisma
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0 posted 01-05-2001 06:49 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma


Waterfalls

whispering of trees
synchronized with falling tears
meeting waterfalls

Charisma




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© Copyright 2001 Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman - All Rights Reserved
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three lines and you have brought forth a different view of waterfalls from mine--i always think of waterfalls as angry beings and the rapids as their way to vent their anger....

nice haiku..i do love to read how others feel about things
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2 posted 01-05-2001 01:14 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Kaile: thank you for your reply......waterfalls can being your way....but if you take a good look...than you will see the beauty behind that anger face.
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whispering of trees
synchronized with falling tears
meeting waterfalls

beautiful...just beautiful.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy
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ohh very beautiful once again!!!! I do enjoy your perspectives! A very nice write..love, Koko

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko


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Captivating!  Well done!
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Charisma, this is beautiful, thank you!!!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen

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Beautiful graphic and beautiful poem and a fantastic poet!!!!

Nathan
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Charisma--I like this muchly.  Very nicely done.

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Kathleen: thank you for your kind reply, so glad that you like it.

Nate: thank you......you make me *blush*  
nice to see you around again.

poeminister: I am very glad that you like this one.........thank you for your kind words
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gorgeous!
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