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Daniel J D
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-01-04 10:15 PM


I AM

I am the pen that writes verses
Held by the fingers of a poet
Words flow through for you to enjoy
I am poet

I follow your dreams
Fill your heart with words describing love
My words emit pictures of life from deep within
I am poet

I tell you about butterflies
Roaming freely towards rainbows
In enchanted memoirs of melodies rhyming
I am poet

I often feel your pain
Take away your ills, comforting you
With words to make you smile again
I am poet

I bring nature to you, for you to rejuvenate
Past losses of tireless dreams
Sincerity as strong as waterfalls
As gentle as the sounds of canaries
I am poet

I am truth and hope and love
Because I love your exhuberance
Your need for my pen to flow
To the depths of your mind, telling you
That life is worth every moment
And most of all you are everything
I am poet to you

I thank you for being there for me
For without you, poet I am not.


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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Startime
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1 posted 2001-01-04 10:27 PM


Oh gosh this is filled with the picture of the man who weaves for us visions of wonder, understanding and love. Wonderful job. Much love and hugs to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-01-05 12:05 PM


I bring nature to you, for you to rejuvenate
Past losses of tireless dreams
Sincerity as strong as waterfalls
As gentle as the sounds of canaries
I am poet

every line written  was so beautiful, Daniel  

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Poeminister
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Regina SK; Canada
3 posted 2001-01-05 12:16 PM


Daniel--Very nicely done.  Excellent write.  

Poeminister

Charisma
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4 posted 2001-01-05 06:25 AM


and you are a POET indeed....wonderful expressed my friend

((warm hugs))
Charisma

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2001-01-05 07:02 AM


and yes sir, you are poet...spinner of soft tales and whimsical wishes...very well met, here Daniel...in your usual gentle style. Lovely!



kaile
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6 posted 2001-01-05 07:11 AM


daniel, its nice to know why a fellow poet writes...and i do know some people who are inspired to write because of their special someone....

thanx

Kethry
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7 posted 2001-01-05 09:16 AM


Wow! There's a lot of diversity within this challenge and you are up there with the best of the best. Well done
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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8 posted 2001-01-06 12:37 PM


JD~

'In enchanted memoirs of melodies rhyming
I am poet'


Indeed !
And I thank you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
9 posted 2001-01-07 07:17 PM


Startime,
The magic of poetry lives in everyone here at Passions, I am no exception. Thank you so much for your wonderful words.

Nakd,
As long as you enjoyed this poem, I am happy. Cheers.

Poetminister,
Thank you kindly, love your work as well.

Charisma,
Thank you my sweet friend, your words are always comforting.

Serenity,
I followed your path, I could not have come up with the idea if I tried, you are wonderful.

Kaile,
Thank you, here at Passions as you have seen already there is a wealth of beauty and feelings. Enjoy.

Kethry,
I am deeply honored from such wonderful praises. Thank you.

Marge,
Oh you are so sweet, I appreciate your kind remarks, thank you.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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