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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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The bitter taste of rain Leaving all my thoughts disdained Contempt for all I feel Sometimes hard to conceal Kept hidden from my face With smile I did replace The need to hold you close Ease pains I feel the most Hollowed inside out Confused, full of doubt The direction that I need All this passion must concede Bursting from my heart, Bleeding and contort Alone. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SPIKED, this is the ultimate of heartfelt expression from all the poetry you have shared with me in my many readings... Oh boy oh boy, this is an emotional tugging and superb write...(2LibraryItGoes) [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-04-2001).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very sad when a heart is full of passion and no one to share...nicely written spiked.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Funny...had much to say to this one..and not too much to type...just....sometimes a good wall of defense makes for formidable offense...but only in a very competitive sport...just smile why doncha? |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
heartfelt penned...so much said in few lines wonderful done (((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Quite a back pressure of love! I hope you find that special relief by getting her back over to recieve some of that passion... good write! ethome |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thanks so very much all of you. Rich |
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