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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2001-01-04 07:13 PM




“Reflection In A Mirror”

by
Bill Charles


~~~~
Your reflection in a mirror
can only come close
to revealing the
graceful beauty of you,
who has charmed me with
a magical spell…

And that beauty has found
its way deep within
my timorous heart
and will reside there,
faithfully, unconditionally,
and endlessly…
~~~~





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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2001-01-04 07:18 PM


your words are very magical Bill and the reflections even more so..*s
~Wynter

* I love this one, short and sweet


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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2 posted 2001-01-04 07:19 PM


lovely piece.....sir.
enjoyed reading it.

Charisma

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-01-04 07:31 PM


Very nice and thank you for the large print, my eyes were burning and this felt great!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen


Bill Charles
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4 posted 2001-01-04 11:45 PM


Evening nakdthoughts,

I thank you for the considerate and kind words about this writing. It is magical to me.


Evening Charisma,

Thanks for stopping by, and glad that you enjoyed this short one.


Evening Irish Rose,

Appreciate you coming by for a read, and I kinda feel the same way about the large print. A little easier on the eyes.


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5 posted 2001-01-04 11:48 PM


beautifully written indeed bill..lovely images and thoughts..

                 ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



ethome
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6 posted 2001-01-05 04:56 AM


Bill ain't the magic of love a wonderful thing!?  Love you you put this thing together straight from your timorous heart you have gained the strength to dispel your fears and take a chance on that heart!
Bill Charles
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7 posted 2001-01-05 11:56 AM


Good morning Victoria,

And a great morning it is, as I believe that I have this flu bug whipped. Nice to see you as always, and appreciate your reply.


Good morning ethome,

ethome, the magic of love is grand, it is! Yes, it was put together from this timorous heart, as you have seen, but so deeply sensed when I wrote it. The heart is there and wide open, may the strength be with me. Thank you so much, for this thoughtful reply.


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8 posted 2001-01-05 02:06 PM


This is beautiful, Bill... I think you've been bitten by something more powerful than the flu bug! *S*
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9 posted 2001-01-05 03:07 PM


very beautiful Bill.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

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10 posted 2001-01-05 10:03 PM


These are unconditionally wonderful reflective thoughts, BCI...
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