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I Am...Nakedthoughts

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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 01-04-2001 06:26 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for nakdthoughts

"I AM" challenge

I am the essence of you, in the presence of me.
I wonder if my dreams treasured in hold, shall see reality.
I hear your voice calling within the storms that rage in my night.
I see your shadow beckoning me to collide in pleasures delight.
I want, I need, I desire the always of your decree.
I am the essence of you, in the presence of me.

I pretend in waters surround, you enter and freeze me to your press.
I feel you always touching my mind, shaping, molding, I acquiesce.
I touch your touch, wrapping myself within reflections flamed by candle light.
I worry that this is but a dream, to be snuffed out each night.
I cry the moment your whispers leave me weakened with no guarantee.
I am the essence of you, in the presence of me.

I understand your love for me is true and must trust in your word.
I say what my heart desires in expressions to you only, heard.
I dream of the day when words of love shall not be distanced any more.
I try each morning to hold onto the memory of each breath shared before.
I hope that the heavens above hear my nightly plea.
I am the essence of you, in the presence of me.

~Wynter



"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 01-04-2001 06:32 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Evening Wynter,

A challenge you have accepted, and a challenge you have captured. You just get better and better. Keep them coming.

BC
Lighthousebob
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2 posted 01-04-2001 07:01 PM       View Profile for Lighthousebob   Email Lighthousebob   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lighthousebob's Home Page   View IP for Lighthousebob

You have portrayed yourself quite romantically.... In that we all share in this common need to be loved, I commend your thoughts expressed completely.  Bob <><
Martie
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3 posted 01-04-2001 07:04 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Very gracefully penned, Wynter.
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4 posted 01-04-2001 09:14 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

lovely wynter..you met the challenge wonderfully

               ~V~


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nakdthoughts
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5 posted 01-04-2001 11:43 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

BC...I think I have a "fan" in you..and the  breeze of warmth  keeps Wynter from freezing... thank you  

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


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6 posted 01-04-2001 11:53 PM       View Profile for Poeminister   Email Poeminister   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poeminister's Home Page   View IP for Poeminister

Naked--Beautifully done.

Poeminister
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7 posted 01-05-2001 12:31 AM       View Profile for maxtec1   Email maxtec1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit maxtec1's Home Page   View IP for maxtec1

Wonderful writing. i loved it.
Love and light,
Richard
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8 posted 01-05-2001 02:13 AM       View Profile for VAS   Email VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

Beautiful.  As I read this, your self-revelation, I became more aware of something about me.  My hopes and dreams do not hold much existence in this world, this side of life.  They are more sure in the other side of life.  I guess I don't think there's going to be much in this world that will come to me again.  
And yet, I do have so many blessings to be thankful for...just don't expect anymore tender touches and sweet words whispered in my ears.  And when I go here, to this place in my thoughts, I am sorrow.  So I will go away from them and pretend human love doesn't matter.
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9 posted 01-05-2001 03:42 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

WYNTER, I'm so happy I got a chance to read your post...
Ya know sweetie, there are some feelings in here that I can relate to and you have penned this I AM exquisitely...
I dunno about you but I have found this challenge of 'finally' opening up an incredible experience...
What I found difficult and still do is to read what one writes in the moments before and I guess that's the process of learning about oneself and facing the feelings buried within the heart...
Hugs2U
Coco

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Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 01-05-2001 03:46 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Oh, how I love a romantic poem
This is lovely
I like the repetition of your theme
Liz
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11 posted 01-05-2001 04:00 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

wynter...wonderful presentation who you are....and I love it.....excellent penned my friend

((hugs))
Charisma
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12 posted 01-05-2001 04:03 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

You are romantically nice...James
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LH/Bob, love IS what makes the world go 'round and I don't believe there can ever be too much... thank you

Martie, thank you very much for your kindness...in responding  


~Victoria, you know how I DO love a challenge   thank you...

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


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14 posted 01-05-2001 08:50 AM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Wynter,
you truly are thoughtfully naked in this exposing write
write on, in song
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.


nakdthoughts
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15 posted 01-05-2001 01:08 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Poeminister & Richard

thank you both  ..I thought it was a fun challenge..and had no idea where I would go with it..it is amazing the different takes on this challenge..*s


~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


Mark Bohannan
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16 posted 01-05-2001 01:14 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Beautifully spoken my friend.  I am glad that you took the challenge and ran with it.  This was an enjoyable read and I especially liked your line

"I am the essence of you, in the presence of me.
nakdthoughts
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17 posted 01-05-2001 04:25 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

VAS - don't pretend human love doesnt matter..it matters almost more than anything else in life, at least I think so...huggzz
and thanks for your words *s

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


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18 posted 01-05-2001 04:34 PM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

How very wonderfully you met the challenge. This is pure and very heartfelt. I loved the read. Much love and hugs to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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nakdthoughts
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19 posted 01-06-2001 01:30 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Coco- thank you, yes I loved this challenge..I thought it would be harder..but once I started it just poured out *s thank you for the huggzz...some days they are needed more than others.

Liz & Charisma-thank youboth for reading and responding...each one of us penned such different thoughts..I was surprised by the many feelings we each revealed.
huggzz to you both

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


nakdthoughts
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20 posted 01-06-2001 01:36 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

James-hmmm romantically nice...sweetly  said by you..thank you  

Kethry- yes  sometimes I do feel a bit naked in my writings  

Mark- "I am the essence of you, in the presence of me." I have no idea where that came from..but that was the beginning of my thought process on this challenge..and I tried to stay with the theme..there is  so much more to me..but I think I expose more than enough..as Kethry has pointed out  

Startime- thank you..yes heartfelt it was and I am glad we all joined in on this challenge Thank you once again...

~Wynter



"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


tracie66
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21 posted 01-06-2001 01:36 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

WOW!!!
You have done a wonderful job with this challenge. Beautiful thoughts indeed...well penned
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


nakdthoughts
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22 posted 01-09-2001 01:25 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Tracie, thank you for the WOW..I rarely  feel those but yours came across strong..*s

huggzz
~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


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good to come back here and read an oldie
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