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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-01-04 07:46 AM



Love Me


love me
like never before
lift me
higher and higher
take me there
where our heart
will be
one

love me
with unbounded passions
watch me
in feminine glory
full of anticipation
to become
one

love me
with eagerly desire
guide me
with stormily kisses
done the doorway
to become
one

love me
with unforgettable love
show me
your fascinating key
unlock my melting door
than finally we'll be
united as
one

Charisma



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Victoria
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1 posted 2001-01-04 09:33 AM


united as one..a wonderful thought..HUGSS
Lovely write hon..

                    ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Charisma
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2 posted 2001-01-04 08:32 PM


thank you for your lovely reply Victoria...always fine to see you.

btw, thanks for your visit on my homepage and to sign my guestbook aswel.

((hugs))
Charisma

Daniel J D
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3 posted 2001-01-04 08:35 PM


Charisma,
I close my eyes when I read this gem.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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4 posted 2001-01-05 11:47 AM


Daniel: if you close your eyes, can you still read me than.....    

Beki
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5 posted 2001-01-05 07:52 PM


nicely written request...it is a simple thing  not so much to ask   thanks for sharing
Poeminister
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6 posted 2001-01-05 11:47 PM


Charisma--A passionate, desireful peice.  Very beautifully written.  Enjoyed the read.

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe


jwesley
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7 posted 2001-01-05 11:50 PM


Simple written, beautiful request...I'm positive there are many that would like to fill it for you...

jwesley

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8 posted 2001-01-06 05:18 PM


Beki: thank you for your reply, appreciate it very much

poeminister: thank you for your lovely reply...I am so glad that you love it.

jwesley: maybe there are many...but I only want it from one man...  


Kethry
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9 posted 2001-01-06 05:29 PM


Charisma,
there is so much to love about you how can anyone not! Beautiful write
Be well and tell
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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