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Open Poetry #11

Mountain lake

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

0 posted 2001-01-04 07:34 AM

MOUNTAIN LAKE

quiet was that bright night
at the mountain lake
only a cold breeze
and yellow flowers
and us whispering
fearless

where there is a mountain lake
in a quiet night
there is no fear

will I ever see that mountain lake again?

are the yellow flowers still there?

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2001-01-04 08:04 AM

quit sure that you will find that mountain lake once again...with all the yellow flowers

wonderful done

Charisma

Ladycat

Senior Member

since 1999-07-05

Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX

2 posted 2001-01-04 08:08 AM

Ahh, such a softly touching piece it was another wonderful read from a gentleman who didn't know how to write English all that well.
Deep inside we are all still looking for that mountain lake.

Loved it.
Love,
Lady

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

3 posted 2001-01-04 02:47 PM

Oh, how peaceful! When you find the mountain lake, the yellow flowers and the cold wind, will you let me know? I love the poem. Hugs, ME

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

4 posted 2001-01-04 02:49 PM

Thanks to you Charisma for your positive comment and thanks you Ladycat for liking this small poem (did you get the email?) And thanks to you Mother_Earth, ok, I'll let you know!

[This message has been edited by Agust P (edited 01-04-2001).]

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