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tracie66
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0 posted 2001-01-04 03:21 AM


~WORDS~

I sense your sadness
I feel your lonliness
I wish there was something
I could do
~~
All I have are words my friend
These words I give to you
~~
Decisions in life
Are hard sometimes
Life's journey often
Long and tough
Many roads along the way
Are often extremely rough
~~
Know that I'm not too far away
Only a click in fact
I'll be here to listen
Send my winged ~HUGS~
floating back
~~
I'll never say
That I'm disappointed
I'll always understand
That you my friend
Should be happy
Take life by the hand
~~
Let it wrap itself around you
Smother you with it's love
Hold you up
With it's sweet essence
Keep you there
High above
~~
There is alot
We can still learn
Alot that she can tell
I wish you every happiness in life
Take care my friend
Be well
~~

Floating my winged ~HUGS~ your way my friend

~Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



© Copyright 2001 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2001-01-04 03:33 AM


This is what makes Passions such a wonderful place to be a part of.  You show your heart and share it well my friend.  These words of comfort are sure to reach the soul of the one they were intended for.  
tracie66
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2 posted 2001-01-04 03:48 AM


Mark~
Hi there my friend....thanks for your reply  
Passions is a great place and I do hope my words can comfort the friend that they are intended for...thanks
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Charisma
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3 posted 2001-01-04 04:06 AM


I can only echo Mark....he have it right, this one is a jewel, and written with a caring loving heart.

this is a keeper for sure.

(((hugs)))
Charisma

CocoBaci
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4 posted 2001-01-04 05:01 AM


Tracie, I must say I got all teary eyed reading this lovely poem you wrote for friend...
These are such gentle loving words of heart...
You're a sweet treasure and I thank you for this most enjoyable read...

ethome
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5 posted 2001-01-04 05:04 AM


Tracie that is such a wise and warm poem full of friedship love. Your friend has a true friend indeed...very very well done I love it!!
tracie66
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6 posted 2001-01-04 06:14 AM


Hi Charis  
Thanks very much hon for your sweet reply
~HUGS~ right back at ya
Tracie~

Coco girl  
I'm so glad you liked and that you read and replied...much thanks sweetie
~HUG~
Tracie~

Ethome~
Hi there friend  
Wrote this for someone here at passions who needs a ~HUG~ and understanding, (she knows who she is)this is how I felt after an email she sent me...thanks for your comments they are always appreciated
~HUG~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2001-01-04 07:33 AM


Truly inspirational Tracie ... friendship and love flow through these lines, sending out warm feelings of strength and compassion ... just beautiful!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sven
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8 posted 2001-01-04 09:34 PM


this is just another of the reasons that you're such a wonderful person tracie. . .  

wonderful poem my friend. . .

------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2001-01-04 10:39 PM


Tracie~
As always, your heart shows in all you say.
Any friend would be fortunate to receive
a Winged ~Hug~ from you.

If it's okay with you, I'm gonna hitchhike
on that *Hug* of yours, with one of my own.
Thanks for the ride ... you sweet lady.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mother_Earth
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10 posted 2001-01-04 11:23 PM


This is such a gentle and caring message for your friend.  Thanks for shareing it with us.  And a hug for you,  ME
tracie66
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11 posted 2001-01-05 05:24 AM


Oh Kit much thanks for your beautiful reply...~HUG~
Tracie~

Sven~
Thanks, your words are appreciated my friend  
~HUG~
Tracie~

Awww Margie  
This ones just for you sweetie

~HUG~

I'm smiling now my friend
love ya
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Kethry
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12 posted 2001-01-05 08:35 AM


Tracie,
this is just wonderful, I wish it was for me, but I'm going to grab those hugs anyway and pretend it was.
write on
Keth


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



BloomingRose
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13 posted 2001-01-05 08:58 AM


I don't know who these words are intended for, but they touch my heart. I have a lot going on, so this brings tears to know there are people like you left in this world.
Beautiful words you share.
Hugs, Deb

tracie66
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14 posted 2001-01-06 01:25 AM


Keth~
Hon ride my ~HUGS~ anytime sweetie
~HUG~
Tracie~

BR~
If they touched you, I'm glad and here's a floating ~HUG~ for you as well
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



tracie66
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15 posted 2001-01-06 01:28 AM


ME~
I'm sorry, I don't know how I missed you but I did ((sorry)) you get an extra HUG
~HUG~ ~HUG~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Lady Lightning
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16 posted 2001-01-06 02:31 AM


Aww Tracie..How sweet you are...I have a feeling I know just who these ~HUGS~ are for..She is a wonderful lady and deserves them so..and much more..This was so special...~hugs~ to you for her ~hugs~... ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Lone Wolf
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17 posted 2001-01-06 04:53 PM


Tracie,

In my opinion, these are more than just words.  They are a portrait of friendship that all of us should be lucky enough to be a part of.  May your friend feel the warmth of your love wash over her and be comforted by the angel winged hugs sent her way.  I am betting she is feeling better already.  she is very lucky to have a friend like you to lean on.  Lovely sentiments my friend.    

~HUGS~ to you,
LW
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Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

[This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 01-06-2001).]

Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2001-01-06 06:01 PM


Tracie~

What a sweet gift of friendship you are.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
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19 posted 2001-01-06 06:29 PM


words can work magic!!!!!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen


tracie66
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20 posted 2001-01-07 06:58 AM


LL~
Thanks for a lovely post and for your hugs all round
~HUG~
Tracie~

LW~
I know she knows that I care and I appreciate her friendship as much as she does mine, I feel honoured to have found so many wonderful friends here at passions and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for your beautiful reply my friend...thanks
~HUG~
Tracie~

Margie~
I feel so happy to have so many friends here and you my friend are just wonderful to me...thanks
P.S I just love that angel  
~HUG~
Tracie~

Kathleen~
So true, they can can't they...thanks sweetie
~HUG~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Irie
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21 posted 2001-01-07 12:38 PM


Tracie,
I firmly believe that what you have is a gift.
There are not many people in this cruel world that have the
ability to see past there own issues in life and reach out to help someone else.

It's people like you who make this world go 'round!  

Great poem by the way  
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~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"




[This message has been edited by Irie (edited 01-07-2001).]

tracie66
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22 posted 2001-01-09 07:10 AM



Irie~
What a special reply you have written...thanks
Your response has touched me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart
~HUG~
Tracie~
P.S I can't be there in person for my friend but only hope that my words can help, even if only a little.


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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