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kingly drama queen
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kingly drama queen |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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In words I hope you understand I wash my hands-- release command... of all you wish of destiny... I'll pray for you, and pray you see... before you come the sweet game piece retired to the side... I weep... for both us swept off our feet by the kingly drama queen. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"kingly drama queen"... great title! excellent write, here, ms. serenity...... "before you come the sweet game piece retired to the side..." great lines...... enjoyed this! (but, i enjoy the roller derby, too, so... rock & roll!!) hehe.... *wink* |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Vintage serenity here!!! Nicely done.  |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Serenity--I like this muchly. Wonderul writing. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Enjoyed this very much.  Rich |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wanted to say my proper thank you's---almost didn't 'cause it makes me sort of sick just to read it...but thanks. Now excuse me? But methinks I need to go take a shower too..(blech) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Celeste I love it when you write like this ...it's a hard one for me to comment on so I'll just have to say ...keep'em comin! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
you knew I was going to read this one, I have a friend who could fit the title description but he is a noble soul. anyway ranting here, wonderfully written poem, excellent lines, loved them all especially "and pray you see... before you come the sweet game piece retired to the side..." It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
I loved this poem, open and direct AP |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
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