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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-01-03 09:12 PM


Arcane Discord

if you have to lament of me
then bring it to the floor
but don't pass the back of me
not at our passion's door
don't bring it to this very room
once a room of grand delight
and if you should discard me now
then discard this very night

for I have loved you once, my dear
and more than once did I
settle for the gift of you
and in you, thus were I…
with you I have gi'en promise rare
with you, I did ever gust
sweet promises, sweet evermore
I ne'er knew your lust…


so sweet dream, sweet refrain
'tis gone, long gone as it will
sweetest dream, 'tis august,
but love has lost it's refrain…

01.03.01



© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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1 posted 2001-01-03 09:16 PM


Wow!  I think you're on a plane beyond the rest of us, sunshine.  I love the realm in which you live...wish I could reach so far...

jwesley

Denise
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2 posted 2001-01-03 09:20 PM


Is everything okay, Karilea?

Denise

doreen peri
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3 posted 2001-01-03 09:20 PM


damn! um.... it's powerful.. angry.. forceful... honest... significant.... wonderful writing..... damn! geez.. it's floored me..... something about it is so important.... so real...it hurts me to read it....

excellent writing, karilea! ((hugs))

Balladeer
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4 posted 2001-01-03 09:26 PM


Karilea, I must say this one has me very concerned....
Sunshine
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5 posted 2001-01-03 09:55 PM


Hello all...a memory return, 'tis nothing more...
but kindly all of you have knocked on my door...

james, some memories need be buried...true?

denise, my dear, I am fine...thank you...

doreen, honest I am, 'tis me...

'Deer, I thank you most for looking in on me...

I am fine, I had a memory of gone...
and in this, I should have written long...
a man who betrayed my love so real
and since hidden my way of feel...

so forgive me as I lament
the time lost, that could have been spent
in searching for one, that one that would
love me as if he should...

but hey!...this is Sun...and she's fine!

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