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KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
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Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-01-03 09:05 PM



When I gaze out o’er horizon blue
Or listen to the roaring sea
Or behold a sunsets awesome view
Memories come flooding back to me

And I think about you....

When I take long walks in our special place
And smell plumeria in the air
I can almost see your handsome face
And dream that you’re really standing there.

Yes..I think about you...

I love you with all my heart, you know
As each and every day goes by
You’re here with me everywhere I go
And you’ll be with me until I die.

My love.. I think about you!


copyright November 2000 Koko Stewart Koomoa
(all rights reserved)




Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



© Copyright 2001 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
1 posted 2001-01-03 09:08 PM


Its really painful to be without a person you love. great writing my friend.
Love and light,
Richard

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
2 posted 2001-01-03 09:12 PM


Some things we just have to hold in our memories as precious. Nice poem. Aloha from a former resident of Oahu, many years ago.
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2001-01-03 09:13 PM


Thoughts, of those we love particularly, are so wonderful, aren't they...as is this piece from you.

jwesley

KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
4 posted 2001-01-03 09:20 PM


Maxtec: Yep it's hard all right..especially since this was written before it was all over ..LOL I like the sentiments though..  
Thanks for your comments, Richard!

Songbird: Aloha friend, where are you now? In snow? eeeek W ell I bet you miss Oahu wherever it is that u are now.... Aloha pumehana ..thanks for the comments  

JWesley: I appreciate that sweet comment very much. thank you and Happy New year!< !signature-->

Passion,imagination
  and intellect
    running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko
  



[This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 01-03-2001).]

Victoria
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Posts 5869

5 posted 2001-01-03 09:32 PM


lovely words..i use to live on oahu ten years ago..for five years..miss the beautiful ocean and palm trees...Hawaii inspired me to write poetry Hang loose

              ~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Charisma
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lost in blue pages
6 posted 2001-01-04 03:01 AM


love this wonderful piece penned with so much love.

((hugs))
Charisma

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2001-01-06 04:22 AM


Beautiful words of love Koko...liked the style you used...James
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
8 posted 2001-01-06 04:28 AM


Sweet and beautiful thoughts Koko and I love the line for repetitiion for emphasis...well done!  Have a nice day in paradise!   ethome
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