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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Do you not see? It's what I do. I offer now. All to you. All my fault. I should have seen, had I not been blind by shades of green...???? I give it up. This all? It's yours... I retire--keys to doors... no more, no more, not evermore, will I cower shades of lore... No more! Will I, shallow, wade, and call a dim lit bulb the shade... No more, no more.. I settle not... I tread again, where love should not.... I heard the whisper of the truth... and closed my eyes to dream of youth. Have it all. I yield the fight. For I have found strength in Knight-- understanding of the plight, and everything? that ever was? was just because, I said, "because..." [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 01-04-2001).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful! Found myself wanting it to go on and on... Not that it "needs to", just "wanting" it to. jwesley |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quote: you're one awesome writer, ms seren...... one awesome writer........ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep! Awesome writing, Serenity! Denise |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
J? I wanted to go on and on too...that was the whole point...thank you for getting it, and for forgiving me the abrupt stop. do? no words necessary...hugs m'lady..and oh..okay..if ya have ta, ya can feel me butt! denise? sorry about all that...lol...I do thank you as always for your kindness love to all |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When the dance ends but the music plays on it is easy to get lost on the floor. Wonderful write my friend. You sure know how to wield that pen of yours in battle. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
S, Well, good . . . you haven't given up on "cryptic". Like I said, don't. The music . . . E |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
unquestionably one of your very best |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just "because". . . that's all anyone needs. . . wonderful serenity. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Have it all. I yield the fight. For I have found strength in Knight-- understanding of the plight, and everything? that ever was? was just because, I said, "because..." Powerful writing, It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hey m'angelheart....thank you dawlin'...would ya believe hormones???? er...bad planetary alignment? um...the hubby has been home too much...sigh, okay, okay...so I"M MOODY...lol and hugs to you. Krawdad!!! You keep sneaking up on me and startline me...and thanks for the interest...now when are you going to grace the forum with some of YOUR work???HMMM???? Wils...thank you, I think...lol...and have been trying to catch up on e mail and replies...haven't forgotten ya m'friend! Sven...and no it's not ALL about football! *wink* and thank you dear one! brian...lol...I did it again..(typed "brain" instead of brian) geez...thanks friend!!! Hugs to forum...off to read some more! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Sista, fabulous writing here hon hugs to you! Maree I need a lullaby a kiss goodnight Angel sweet love of my life Oh, I need this ~Natalie Merchant~ |
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