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Sail On
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Sail On |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sail away, true love don't come back again dare not try recall in me a time when we were more than friends Sail away, true love anchor at safe shores I'm the tempest wind that blows don't want to hurt you anymore Seas are calm the waters clear skies are ever blue the sun is shining now my dear I've learned to live without you Sail away, true love don't hear my siren's song ignore these tempting gentle waves for it wouldn't be too long... When the tempest winds would blow threatening to overtake you twisting emotions in your heart stirring guilt & ache in you so, Sail away, my true love don't look this way again you know deep down inside somehow we'll never be more than good friends Sail away, true love sail on, sail away, true love sail on... -Tier{Robin} 6/99 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a sad song Tier; hopefully a bit of poetic compassion, nothing else? [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 01-03-2001).] |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I sure get the drift! Good poem! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very sad, Tier, but very beautifully penned! Denise |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Sunshine, Songbird, and Denise, This is really a song that I wrote when I was feeling blue. -Tier{Robin |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Well done, flows wonderfully and has just a touch of sadness, I enjoyed the read very much, well, I actually kind of sang it, really  With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*chuckles* Dragonpoet, I'm curious as to what melody you heard as you read or "sang" the words! I'm glad that you liked it... -Tier |
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