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maxtec1
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0 posted 2001-01-03 04:07 PM



What More Can I Do
By Richard Maxfield
1-3-2000

The wind whispers your name
Shadows make your shape
Sun light brightness in your eyes
For me there is no escape

Falling rose petals
Hint at your scent
Close my eyes and dream
You must be heaven sent

Ripples of water
Chills on my skin
Forever playing in my mind
Thoughts of you again

Feather touch of flesh
Your neck a butterfly kiss
Lost with in your eyes
Love I have not missed

Behold the graceful beauty
God placed in you
Bound by your presents
What more can I do



© Copyright 2001 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-01-03 05:00 PM


Take her dancing....complete the moment...

Victoria
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2 posted 2001-01-03 05:24 PM


love the way your pen waltzs across the stage of passions

                 ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



ethome
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3 posted 2001-01-03 05:47 PM


Not much more a man could do except write a beautiful love poem about it.... you know...something like this one...take care...ethome
maxtec1
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4 posted 2001-01-03 08:45 PM


Thank you all for the comments.
Love and light,
Richard

Denise
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5 posted 2001-01-03 09:57 PM


Beautiful thoughts, Richard! Lovely!

Denise

wayoutwalt
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6 posted 2001-01-03 11:33 PM


ALOT!! no i am kidding, this is great yuh
maxtec1
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7 posted 2001-01-04 03:39 PM


Thanks for the comments all you wonderful people.
Richard

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8 posted 2001-01-04 04:48 PM


.........sultry as always.
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